Attachment 259271 Details for Bug 383741 – Patch to correct or improve some English usage

[patch] Patch to correct or improve some English usage

system-config-firewall-1.0.10-strings.patch (text/plain), 6.76 KB, created by Paul W. Frields on 2007-11-15 02:42:53 UTC

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Creator: Paul W. Frields

Created: 2007-11-15 02:42:53 UTC

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>diff -uNr system-config-firewall-1.0.10/src/fw_gui.py system-config-firewall-1.0.10-new/src/fw_gui.py
>--- system-config-firewall-1.0.10/src/fw_gui.py	2007-11-09 07:59:27.000000000 -0500
>+++ system-config-firewall-1.0.10-new/src/fw_gui.py	2007-11-14 21:37:09.000000000 -0500
>@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@
>     runPriority = 50
>     moduleName = _("Firewall")
>     commentTag = _("Configure firewall rules")
>-    shortMessage = _("You can use a firewall to allow access to specific "
>-                     "services on your computer from other computers and "
>-                     "prevent unauthorized access from the outside world.  "
>-                     "Which services, if any, do you wish to allow access to?")
>+    shortMessage = _("A firewall allows other computers to access "
>+                     "selected services on your computer, and helps prevent "
>+                     "unauthorized access beyond these selections. Select the "
>+                     "services to which the firewall should allow access.")
> 
>     def destroy(self, args):
>         gtk.main_quit()
>diff -uNr system-config-firewall-1.0.10/src/fw_parser.py system-config-firewall-1.0.10-new/src/fw_parser.py
>--- system-config-firewall-1.0.10/src/fw_parser.py	2007-09-25 11:16:30.000000000 -0400
>+++ system-config-firewall-1.0.10-new/src/fw_parser.py	2007-11-14 21:26:50.000000000 -0500
>@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
>                       metavar=_("[<type>:][<table>:]<filename>"),
>                       callback=_append_unique,
>                       help=_("Specify a custom rules file for inclusion in "
>-                             "the firewall. It will be included after the "
>+                             "the firewall, after the "
>                              "default rules. Default type: ipv4, "
>                              "default table: filter. "
>                              "(Example: ipv4:filter:/etc/sysconfig/"
>diff -uNr system-config-firewall-1.0.10/src/fw_services.py system-config-firewall-1.0.10-new/src/fw_services.py
>--- system-config-firewall-1.0.10/src/fw_services.py	2007-09-25 11:16:30.000000000 -0400
>+++ system-config-firewall-1.0.10-new/src/fw_services.py	2007-11-14 21:36:19.000000000 -0500
>@@ -34,21 +34,21 @@
>     _Service("ipp", _("Network Printing (IPP)"),
>              [ ("631", "tcp"), ("631", "udp"), ],
>              _("The Internet Printing Protocol (IPP) is used for "
>-               "distributed printing. It provides the ability to get "
>+               "distributed printing. IPP provides the ability to get "
>                "information about a printer (e.g. capability and status) "
>                "and to control printer jobs. If you plan to use a network "
>                "printer via cups, do not disable this option."),
>              default=True),
>     _Service("mdns", _("Multicast DNS (mDNS)"), [ ("5353", "udp"), ],
>-             _("mDNS provides the ability to do use DNS programming "
>-               "interfaces, packet formats and operating semantics, in a "
>+             _("mDNS provides the ability to use DNS programming "
>+               "interfaces, packet formats, and operating semantics in a "
>                "small network without a conventional DNS server. If you plan "
>                "to use Avahi, do not disable this option."),
>              default=True),
>     _Service("ipsec", _("IPsec"), [ (None, "ah"), (None, "esp"), ],
>              _("Internet Protocol Security (IPsec) incorporates security "
>-               "for network transmissions into the Internet Protocol (IP) "
>-               "directly. IPsec provides methods for both encrypting data "
>+               "for network transmissions directly into the Internet Protocol "
>+               "(IP). IPsec provides methods for both encrypting data "
>                "and authentication for the host or network it sends to. If you "
>                "plan to use a vpnc server or FreeS/WAN, do not disable this "
>                "option."),
>@@ -68,19 +68,19 @@
> #             "the telnet-server package installed for this option to be "
> #             "useful."),
>     _Service("http", _("WWW (HTTP)"), [ ("80", "tcp"), ],
>-             _("HTTP is the protocol used to serve Web pages. If you plan on "
>-               "making your Web server publicly available, enable this option. "
>+             _("HTTP is the protocol used to serve Web pages. If you plan to "
>+               "make your Web server publicly available, enable this option. "
>                "This option is not required for viewing pages locally or "
>                "developing Web pages.")),
>     _Service("ftp", _("FTP"), [ ("21", "tcp"), ],
>              _("FTP is a protocol used for remote file transfer. If you plan "
>-               "on making your FTP server publicly available, enable this "
>+               "to make your FTP server publicly available, enable this "
>                "option. You need the vsftpd package installed for this option "
>                "to be useful."),
>              modules=[ "nf_conntrack_ftp", ]),
>     _Service("nfs", _("NFS4"), [ ("2049", "tcp"), ("2049", "udp"), ],
>-             _("This allowed you to use the NFS version 4 protocol via TCP "
>-               "to share files. You will need to have the NFS tools installed "
>+             _("The NFS4 protocol is used to share files via TCP networking. "
>+               "You will need to have the NFS tools installed "
>                "and properly configure your NFS server for this option to be "
>                "useful.")),
>     _Service("https", _("Secure WWW (HTTPS)"), [ ("443", "tcp"), ],
>@@ -90,7 +90,8 @@
>                "pages locally or developing Web pages. You need the httpd "
>                "package installed for this option to be useful.")),
>     _Service("smtp", _("Mail (SMTP)"), [ ("25", "tcp"), ],
>-             _("This allows incoming SMTP mail delivery. If you need to allow "
>+             _("This option allows incoming SMTP mail delivery. If you need "
>+               "to allow "
>                "remote hosts to connect directly to your machine to deliver "
>                "mail, enable this option. You do not need to enable this if "
>                "you collect your mail from your ISP's server by POP3 or IMAP, "
>@@ -99,8 +100,8 @@
>                "to use your server to send spam.")),
>     _Service("samba", _("Samba"), [ ("137", "udp"), ("138", "udp"),
>                                     ("139", "tcp"), ("445", "tcp"), ],
>-             _("This allows you to access and participate in Windows "
>-               "file and printer sharing networks.  You need the Samba "
>+             _("This option allows you to access and participate in Windows "
>+               "file and printer sharing networks.  You need the samba "
>                "package installed for this option to be useful."),
>              modules=[ "nf_conntrack_netbios_ns", ]),
>     _Service("dns", _("DNS"), [ ("53", "tcp"), ("53", "udp"), ],

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