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Content Specification Tracker: RHEL FASTRACK Virtualization Guide
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> </w:WordDocument> ></xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> > <w:LatentStyles DefLockedState="false" LatentStyleCount="156"> > </w:LatentStyles> ></xml><![endif]--> ><style> ><!-- > /* Font Definitions */ > @font-face > {font-family:"Bitstream Vera Sans"; > panose-1:2 11 6 3 3 8 4 2 2 4; > mso-font-charset:0; > mso-generic-font-family:swiss; > mso-font-pitch:variable; > mso-font-signature:-2147483473 268443722 0 0 1 0;} > /* Style Definitions */ > p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal > {mso-style-parent:""; > margin:0in; > margin-bottom:.0001pt; > mso-pagination:widow-orphan; > font-size:12.0pt; > font-family:"Times New Roman"; > mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";} >a:link, span.MsoHyperlink > {color:blue; > text-decoration:underline; > text-underline:single;} >a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed > {color:purple; > text-decoration:underline; > text-underline:single;} >p > {mso-margin-top-alt:auto; > margin-right:0in; > mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; > margin-left:0in; > 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{margin-bottom:0in;} >--> ></style> ><!--[if gte mso 10]> ><style> > /* Style Definitions */ > table.MsoNormalTable > {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; > mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; > mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; > mso-style-noshow:yes; > mso-style-parent:""; > mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; > mso-para-margin:0in; > mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; > mso-pagination:widow-orphan; > font-size:10.0pt; > font-family:"Times New Roman"; > mso-ansi-language:#0400; > mso-fareast-language:#0400; > mso-bidi-language:#0400;} ></style> ><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> > <o:shapedefaults v:ext="edit" spidmax="2050"/> ></xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> > <o:shapelayout v:ext="edit"> > <o:idmap v:ext="edit" data="1"/> > </o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--> ></head> > ><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple style='tab-interval:.5in'> > ><div class=Section1> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>RHEL5.2 VIRTUALIZATION GUIDE >REVIEW<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Erroneous content:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="Erroneous%20content:http:/www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Compatibility_of_host_and_guest_combinations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Compatibility_of_host_and_guest_combinations.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The table needs two >additional lines:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span></span><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size: >10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language:PT-BR'>Para-virtualized<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>ia64<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> ></span>ia64<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Fully virtualized<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>ia64<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> ></span>ia64<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Installing_guests.html"><span >lang=PT-BR style='mso-ansi-language:PT-BR'>http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Installing_guests.html</span></a></span><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>unclear whether the planning >questions are referring to the host (dom0) or to the guest (domU)<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_XP_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_XP_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>should mention this is >restricted to i686 and x86_64; ia64 doesn't support Windows as a guest<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_2003_SP1_Server_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_2003_SP1_Server_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>should mention this is >restricted to i686 and x86_64; ia64 doesn't support Windows as a guest<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_additional_storage_devices_to_a_guest.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_additional_storage_devices_to_a_guest.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>much easier to use M suffix >on dd.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Use count=0 instead of count=1 to >avoid writing the single block of zeros.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> ></span>With these two changes, the examples become:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>sparse:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> ></span>dd if=/dev/zero of=FileName.img bs=1M seek=4096 count=0<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>non-sparse: dd if=/dev/zero of=FileName.img >bs=1M count=4096<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Server_best_practices.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Server_best_practices.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>this page refers to running >applications on the hypervisor;<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>this is confusing and should >probably be changed to dom0,<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>especially since the next >chapter refers to dom0<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Securing_the_host.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Securing_the_host.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>There are several ways to >implement security you should know about when integrating Red Hat >Virtualization into your systems.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>- remove "you should know about"<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Together with other people >in your organization,you should create a 'deployment plan'<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>- could it be considered presumptuous to >tell the customer<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>"Together with other people in your >organization"<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The less things running on >dom0, the higher the level of security.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>- s/less/fewer/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>in the >Configuring NAT example why isnt there any case for status and restart<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Bitstream Vera Sans";color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Additional_Para_virtualized_Hardware_Configuration-Virtual_Storage_Devices.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Additional_Para_virtualized_Hardware_Configuration-Virtual_Storage_Devices.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>disk >= [ "<a >href="../../../Documents%20and%20Settings/silbermann/Local%20Settings/var/lib/xen/images/rhel5_64_fv.dsk,hda,w">file:/var/lib/xen/images/rhel5_64_fv.dsk,hda,w</a>",<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> ></span>"tap:aio:/var/lib/xen/images/UserStorage1.dsk,xvda,w" ] <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> ></span>"tap:aio:/var/lib/xen/images/UserStorage2.dsk,xvdb,w" ]<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>-- obvious typo<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>[root@rhel5]# df /mnt/pvdisk_p1<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>-- /mnt/pvdisk_p1 doesn't appear anywhere >else on the page<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Introduction_to_Para_virtualized_Drivers-System_requirements.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Introduction_to_Para_virtualized_Drivers-System_requirements.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>There should >be a statement that clarifies that the Minimum guest operating system version >are architecture dependant</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family: >"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Para_virtualization_Restrictions_and_Support.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Para_virtualization_Restrictions_and_Support.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>To >be consistent w/ the rest of the document you should put the following >paragraph into a Note:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>After >installing the para-virtualized drivers on a guest operating system you should >only use the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: >10.0pt;color:#333333'>xm</span></code> command or <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size: >10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>virsh</span></code> to start >the guests. If <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: >10.0pt;color:#333333'>xm</span></code> is not used the network interfaces (for >example, eth1 and so on) will not be connected correctly during boot. This >problem is known and the Bugzilla number is 300531 and a bug fix is in >progress. The bug connects the network interface to <code><span >style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>qemu-dm</span></code> >and subsequently limits the performance dramatically. <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installation_and_Configuration_of_Para_virtualized_Drivers.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installation_and_Configuration_of_Para_virtualized_Drivers.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>At >the beginning of this section there should be a statement around the fact that >people should check the support table to verify that the PV drivers are >supported in their environment.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_or_stopping_a_domain_during_the_boot_phase.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_or_stopping_a_domain_during_the_boot_phase.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>"The chkconfig >xendomains off command terminates all running<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>domains and shuts down the >domains on the next boot."<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>-- this is ambiguous or wrong, it should be >written more like<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>the explanation for "chkconfig >xendomains on"<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>What is the default value of >xend_unix_server?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Are there any default values >for xend_reallocation_address and xend_address?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>seems to be missing useful >content, such as *how* to manage cpus<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_xend_with_the_host.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_xend_with_the_host.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>seems to be mostly a repeat >of the information at<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>This section only talks >about para-virtualized guests migration; what about fully virtualized guests >which is supported for x86 but not for ia64. There should be a paragraph on >fully virtualized guests and the limititations related to the different archs.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>inconsistent use of >parens/non-parens when referrring to configuration parameters, pick one...<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>same page, >(xend-relocation-address ") and others have a strange lonely >double-quote.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>This is probably an >accident of formatting conversion.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>It >appears on other pages too.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration-An_example_of_a_configuration_for_live_migration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration-An_example_of_a_configuration_for_live_migration.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Title could be simpler, >"An example configuration for live migration", i.e. drop "of >a"<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>This paragraph >should be highlighted in a Warning or a Note:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>Make sure the >directory is exported with the correct options, if you are exporting the >default directory <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: >10.0pt'>/var/lib/xen/images/</span></code> make sure you ONLY export <code><span >style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>/var/lib/xen/images/</span></code> >and NOT <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>/var/lib/xen/</span></code> >as this directory is used by the xend daemon and other Xen components, sharing >it will likely cause unpredictable behavior</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt; >font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/the exampled used/the >example used/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>"Run a simple loop >inside the guest to print out time and hostname every 2 seconds." ... but >the sample loop uses "sleep 3"<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The text doesnt match the >commands this whole first example of migration from et-virt07 to et-virt08 is >all messed up. For example:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;mso-layout-grid-align:none; >text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Initiate >a live migration to et-virt08 <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>does NOT match the command<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;mso-layout-grid-align:none; >text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>[et-virt08 >~]# xm migrate --live xentesttravelvm01 et-virt07<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>One of the samples starts >with the line:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span># doit script<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>This will prevent the >following line from being processed (by the kernel):<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>#!/bin/bash<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The doit line should be >removed.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_with_ssh.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_with_ssh.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>instructions end early.<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>There needs to be some example of how to make >use of the stuff that was just explained, such as how to connect to those >machines using virt-manager<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_over_TLS_and_SSL.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_over_TLS_and_SSL.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://libvirt.org/remote.html">http://libvirt.org/remote.html</a> should >be a link instead of plain text<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Red_Hat_Virtualization_tools.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Red_Hat_Virtualization_tools.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>using grep is unnecessary, >just do:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>lsof -i :5900<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_virsh.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_virsh.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Chapter 21. Managing guests >with virsh<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>23.1. virsh the command line >interface tool for virtualization<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>These >two sections are doubly documenting the same tool.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Bad >sentence structure:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >color:#333333'>You can make a new guest session from an XML machine >definition. If you have a pre-existing guest that you created previously with >the <strong><span style='font-family:"Courier New"'>xm</span></strong> tool or >the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virt-install</span></code> >command.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >color:#333333'>s/ To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the <code><span >style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh</span></code> >command with the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: >10.0pt'>destroy/</span></code> To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the <code><span >style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh</span></code> >command with <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: >10.0pt'>destroy/<o:p></o:p></span></code></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></code></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>s/</span></code><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'> To display >the guest list and the current state with <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size: >10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh/</span></code> To display the guest >list and their current state with <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt; >mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh/<o:p></o:p></span></code></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></code></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>Confusing >statement, why use the CPU? What CPU?<o:p></o:p></span></code></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>running >domains are currently active on the CPU<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Configuring >Memory allocation and Configuring max memory is 2 different version of the >same info- please delete one.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Configuring_GRUB.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Configuring_GRUB.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The >following sentence is repeated twice:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>This >limits the amount of memory that is available for domain0. <span >style='color:#333333'><o:p></o:p></span></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Booting_a_Guest_Domain.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Booting_a_Guest_Domain.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Chapter 25. Starting a >guests during boot<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>The main comment for this section is that >it has nothing to<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>do with starting guests at boot.<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>It provides a single<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>example of starting a guest manually, and >even that is just<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>a rehash of explanation given in previous >chapters.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Debugging_and_Troubleshooting_Red_Hat_Virtualization.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Debugging_and_Troubleshooting_Red_Hat_Virtualization.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Right after the brctl >examples, there's a line that starts with "Other<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>utilities which can be >used...".<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>This sentence ends prematurely.<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Was<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>it supposed to be a >subsection title?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Could tools (such as iostat, >lsof, etc) listed at the start of the Troubleshooting section also have one >lines describing them like done for strace, vncviewer, vncserver?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Is 'sysstat' an RPM package >containing iostat and sar?<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>The >description<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>on p.253 make it sound like >a command.<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Important_Directory_Locations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Important_Directory_Locations.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>First sentence of Section 4 >missing some words - you should do what with the log files?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Troubleshooting_with_the_logs.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Troubleshooting_with_the_logs.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>In Section >"Troubleshooting with a serial console", the example shown<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>uses grub, which isn't used >on ia64.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Should something be noted for<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>ia64?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Full_virtualization_guest_console_access.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Full_virtualization_guest_console_access.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>In this section it says >"you must edit<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>the configuration file in >the /etc/xen directory".<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>What do >you edit in there?<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>It doesn't say.<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>In addition, this is a grub example.<span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Should something be noted for ia64?<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-SELinux_Considerations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-SELinux_Considerations.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Reference is made to the >boolean parameter xend_disable_trans, but it is not used in the example >(xend_disable_t is used).<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Typos:<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-System_requirements.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-System_requirements.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/Fiber Channel/Fibre Channel/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_limitations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_limitations.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/(see(see >Chapter 13/(see Chapter 13/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Also >in the last sentence in the note <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/presen/present/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_during_a_new_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_installation.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_during_a_new_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_installation.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/manaully/manually/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_on_an_existing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_system.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_on_an_existing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_system.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/install/install/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_manager.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_manager.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >mso-ansi-language:DE'>in paragraph 8. <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >mso-ansi-language:DE'>s/installtion/installation/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >mso-ansi-language:DE'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_as_a_para_virtualized_guest.html"><span >lang=DE style='mso-ansi-language:DE'>http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_as_a_para_virtualized_guest.html</span></a></span><span >lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >DE'> <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; >mso-ansi-language:DE'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The >sentence After your guest has completed it is initial bootstrap should be >After your guest has completed its initial bootstrap i.e its instead of >it is<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_install.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_install.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>virt-install output should be properly >aligned; that<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>would make the sample output a lot easier >to read<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Configuring_persistent_storage_in_a_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_environments.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Configuring_persistent_storage_in_a_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_environments.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Title has inconsistency in >a Red Hat .environments word environment should be singular<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'>s/4 device/4 devices/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html"><span >lang=PT-BR style='mso-ansi-language:PT-BR'>http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html</span></a></span><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'> <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>In Those >chapters provide a details description <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>s/details/detailed</span><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>in Note s/Chapter. Chapter >13/Chapter 13/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>s/ it has >access the same interface all the time/ it has access to the same interface all >the time/</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/ <span style='color:#333333'>the >procedure outline below / the procedure outlined below<o:p></o:p></span></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/ allow the the >guests/allow the guests/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/configuration to suite >your local/configuration to suit your local/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span >style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>s/dom0 cpus/dom0-cpus/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/its typically better/its >typically better/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_Virtual_Machine_Managervirt_manager.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_Virtual_Machine_Managervirt_manager.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/with shell privilages on >the host/with shell privileges on the host/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a >href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html</a> ><o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >IT'>s/xm create c va base/ xm create c va-base/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: >IT'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/depreciation/deprecation/<o:p></o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span >style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> > ><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p> > ></div> > ></body> > ></html>
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mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:#0400; mso-fareast-language:#0400; mso-bidi-language:#0400;} </style> <![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> <o:shapedefaults v:ext="edit" spidmax="2050"/> </xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> <o:shapelayout v:ext="edit"> <o:idmap v:ext="edit" data="1"/> </o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--> </head> <body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple style='tab-interval:.5in'> <div class=Section1> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>RHEL5.2 VIRTUALIZATION GUIDE REVIEW<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Erroneous content:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="Erroneous%20content:http:/www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Compatibility_of_host_and_guest_combinations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Compatibility_of_host_and_guest_combinations.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The table needs two additional lines:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span></span><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size: 10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language:PT-BR'>Para-virtualized<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>ia64<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>ia64<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Fully virtualized<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>ia64<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>ia64<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Installing_guests.html"><span lang=PT-BR style='mso-ansi-language:PT-BR'>http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Installing_guests.html</span></a></span><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>unclear whether the planning questions are referring to the host (dom0) or to the guest (domU)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_XP_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_XP_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>should mention this is restricted to i686 and x86_64; ia64 doesn't support Windows as a guest<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_2003_SP1_Server_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_a_Windows_2003_SP1_Server_Guest_as_a_fully_virtualized_guest.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>should mention this is restricted to i686 and x86_64; ia64 doesn't support Windows as a guest<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_additional_storage_devices_to_a_guest.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_additional_storage_devices_to_a_guest.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>much easier to use M suffix on dd.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Use count=0 instead of count=1 to avoid writing the single block of zeros.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>With these two changes, the examples become:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>sparse:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>dd if=/dev/zero of=FileName.img bs=1M seek=4096 count=0<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>non-sparse: dd if=/dev/zero of=FileName.img bs=1M count=4096<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Server_best_practices.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Server_best_practices.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>this page refers to running applications on the hypervisor;<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>this is confusing and should probably be changed to dom0,<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>especially since the next chapter refers to dom0<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Securing_the_host.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Securing_the_host.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>There are several ways to implement security you should know about when integrating Red Hat Virtualization into your systems.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>- remove "you should know about"<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Together with other people in your organization,you should create a 'deployment plan'<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>- could it be considered presumptuous to tell the customer<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>"Together with other people in your organization"<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The less things running on dom0, the higher the level of security.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>- s/less/fewer/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>in the Configuring NAT example why isnt there any case for status and restart<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Bitstream Vera Sans";color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Additional_Para_virtualized_Hardware_Configuration-Virtual_Storage_Devices.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Additional_Para_virtualized_Hardware_Configuration-Virtual_Storage_Devices.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>disk = [ "<a href="../../../Documents%20and%20Settings/silbermann/Local%20Settings/var/lib/xen/images/rhel5_64_fv.dsk,hda,w">file:/var/lib/xen/images/rhel5_64_fv.dsk,hda,w</a>",<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>"tap:aio:/var/lib/xen/images/UserStorage1.dsk,xvda,w" ] <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>"tap:aio:/var/lib/xen/images/UserStorage2.dsk,xvdb,w" ]<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>-- obvious typo<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>[root@rhel5]# df /mnt/pvdisk_p1<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>-- /mnt/pvdisk_p1 doesn't appear anywhere else on the page<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Introduction_to_Para_virtualized_Drivers-System_requirements.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Introduction_to_Para_virtualized_Drivers-System_requirements.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>There should be a statement that clarifies that the Minimum guest operating system version are architecture dependant</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family: "Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Para_virtualization_Restrictions_and_Support.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Para_virtualization_Restrictions_and_Support.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>To be consistent w/ the rest of the document you should put the following paragraph into a Note:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>After installing the para-virtualized drivers on a guest operating system you should only use the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;color:#333333'>xm</span></code> command or <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size: 10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>virsh</span></code> to start the guests. If <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;color:#333333'>xm</span></code> is not used the network interfaces (for example, eth1 and so on) will not be connected correctly during boot. This problem is known and the Bugzilla number is 300531 and a bug fix is in progress. The bug connects the network interface to <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>qemu-dm</span></code> and subsequently limits the performance dramatically. <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installation_and_Configuration_of_Para_virtualized_Drivers.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installation_and_Configuration_of_Para_virtualized_Drivers.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>At the beginning of this section there should be a statement around the fact that people should check the support table to verify that the PV drivers are supported in their environment.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_or_stopping_a_domain_during_the_boot_phase.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_or_stopping_a_domain_during_the_boot_phase.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>"The chkconfig xendomains off command terminates all running<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>domains and shuts down the domains on the next boot."<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>-- this is ambiguous or wrong, it should be written more like<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>the explanation for "chkconfig xendomains on"<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>What is the default value of xend_unix_server?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Are there any default values for xend_reallocation_address and xend_address?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>seems to be missing useful content, such as *how* to manage cpus<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_xend_with_the_host.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Starting_xend_with_the_host.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>seems to be mostly a repeat of the information at<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>This section only talks about para-virtualized guests migration; what about fully virtualized guests which is supported for x86 but not for ia64. There should be a paragraph on fully virtualized guests and the limititations related to the different archs.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>inconsistent use of parens/non-parens when referrring to configuration parameters, pick one...<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>same page, (xend-relocation-address ") and others have a strange lonely double-quote.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>This is probably an accident of formatting conversion.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>It appears on other pages too.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration-An_example_of_a_configuration_for_live_migration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualization_live_migration-An_example_of_a_configuration_for_live_migration.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Title could be simpler, "An example configuration for live migration", i.e. drop "of a"<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>This paragraph should be highlighted in a Warning or a Note:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>Make sure the directory is exported with the correct options, if you are exporting the default directory <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt'>/var/lib/xen/images/</span></code> make sure you ONLY export <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>/var/lib/xen/images/</span></code> and NOT <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>/var/lib/xen/</span></code> as this directory is used by the xend daemon and other Xen components, sharing it will likely cause unpredictable behavior</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/the exampled used/the example used/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>"Run a simple loop inside the guest to print out time and hostname every 2 seconds." ... but the sample loop uses "sleep 3"<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The text doesnt match the commands this whole first example of migration from et-virt07 to et-virt08 is all messed up. For example:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Initiate a live migration to et-virt08 <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>does NOT match the command<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>[et-virt08 ~]# xm migrate --live xentesttravelvm01 et-virt07<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>One of the samples starts with the line:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span># doit script<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>This will prevent the following line from being processed (by the kernel):<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>#!/bin/bash<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The doit line should be removed.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_with_ssh.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_with_ssh.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>instructions end early.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>There needs to be some example of how to make use of the stuff that was just explained, such as how to connect to those machines using virt-manager<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_over_TLS_and_SSL.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Remote_management_of_virtualized_guests-Remote_management_over_TLS_and_SSL.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://libvirt.org/remote.html">http://libvirt.org/remote.html</a> should be a link instead of plain text<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Red_Hat_Virtualization_tools.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Red_Hat_Virtualization_tools.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>using grep is unnecessary, just do:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>lsof -i :5900<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_virsh.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_virsh.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Chapter 21. Managing guests with virsh<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>23.1. virsh the command line interface tool for virtualization<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>These two sections are doubly documenting the same tool.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Bad sentence structure:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; color:#333333'>You can make a new guest session from an XML machine definition. If you have a pre-existing guest that you created previously with the <strong><span style='font-family:"Courier New"'>xm</span></strong> tool or the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virt-install</span></code> command.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; color:#333333'>s/ To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh</span></code> command with the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt'>destroy/</span></code> To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh</span></code> command with <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt'>destroy/<o:p></o:p></span></code></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></code></p> <p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>s/</span></code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'> To display the guest list and the current state with <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size: 10.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh/</span></code> To display the guest list and their current state with <code><span style='mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt'>virsh/<o:p></o:p></span></code></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'><o:p> </o:p></span></code></p> <p class=MsoNormal><code><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#333333'>Confusing statement, why use the CPU? What CPU?<o:p></o:p></span></code></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>running domains are currently active on the CPU<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Configuring Memory allocation and Configuring max memory is 2 different version of the same info- please delete one.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Configuring_GRUB.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Configuring_GRUB.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The following sentence is repeated twice:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>This limits the amount of memory that is available for domain0. <span style='color:#333333'><o:p></o:p></span></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Booting_a_Guest_Domain.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Booting_a_Guest_Domain.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Chapter 25. Starting a guests during boot<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>The main comment for this section is that it has nothing to<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>do with starting guests at boot.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>It provides a single<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>example of starting a guest manually, and even that is just<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>a rehash of explanation given in previous chapters.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Debugging_and_Troubleshooting_Red_Hat_Virtualization.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Debugging_and_Troubleshooting_Red_Hat_Virtualization.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Right after the brctl examples, there's a line that starts with "Other<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>utilities which can be used...".<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>This sentence ends prematurely.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Was<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>it supposed to be a subsection title?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Could tools (such as iostat, lsof, etc) listed at the start of the Troubleshooting section also have one lines describing them like done for strace, vncviewer, vncserver?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Is 'sysstat' an RPM package containing iostat and sar?<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>The description<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>on p.253 make it sound like a command.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Important_Directory_Locations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Important_Directory_Locations.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>First sentence of Section 4 missing some words - you should do what with the log files?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Troubleshooting_with_the_logs.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Troubleshooting_with_the_logs.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>In Section "Troubleshooting with a serial console", the example shown<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>uses grub, which isn't used on ia64.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Should something be noted for<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>ia64?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Full_virtualization_guest_console_access.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Full_virtualization_guest_console_access.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>In this section it says "you must edit<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>the configuration file in the /etc/xen directory".<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>What do you edit in there?<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>It doesn't say.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>In addition, this is a grub example.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>Should something be noted for ia64?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-SELinux_Considerations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-SELinux_Considerations.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Reference is made to the boolean parameter xend_disable_trans, but it is not used in the example (xend_disable_t is used).<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Typos:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-System_requirements.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-System_requirements.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/Fiber Channel/Fibre Channel/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_limitations.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_limitations.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/(see(see Chapter 13/(see Chapter 13/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Also in the last sentence in the note <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/presen/present/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_during_a_new_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_installation.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_during_a_new_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_installation.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/manaully/manually/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_on_an_existing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_system.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_on_an_existing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_system.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/install/install/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_manager.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_manager.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; mso-ansi-language:DE'>in paragraph 8. <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; mso-ansi-language:DE'>s/installtion/installation/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; mso-ansi-language:DE'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_as_a_para_virtualized_guest.html"><span lang=DE style='mso-ansi-language:DE'>http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_as_a_para_virtualized_guest.html</span></a></span><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: DE'> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"; mso-ansi-language:DE'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>The sentence After your guest has completed it is initial bootstrap should be After your guest has completed its initial bootstrap i.e its instead of it is<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_install.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_install.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>virt-install output should be properly aligned; that<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>would make the sample output a lot easier to read<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Configuring_persistent_storage_in_a_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_environments.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Configuring_persistent_storage_in_a_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_environments.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Title has inconsistency in a Red Hat .environments word environment should be singular<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'>s/4 device/4 devices/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html"><span lang=PT-BR style='mso-ansi-language:PT-BR'>http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html</span></a></span><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=PT-BR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: PT-BR'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>In Those chapters provide a details description <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>s/details/detailed</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>in Note s/Chapter. Chapter 13/Chapter 13/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#333333'>s/ it has access the same interface all the time/ it has access to the same interface all the time/</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/ <span style='color:#333333'>the procedure outline below / the procedure outlined below<o:p></o:p></span></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/ allow the the guests/allow the guests/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/configuration to suite your local/configuration to suit your local/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html</a><o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>s/dom0 cpus/dom0-cpus/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/its typically better/its typically better/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_Virtual_Machine_Managervirt_manager.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_Virtual_Machine_Managervirt_manager.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/with shell privilages on the host/with shell privileges on the host/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><a href="http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html">http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: IT'>s/xm create c va base/ xm create c va-base/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";mso-ansi-language: IT'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>s/depreciation/deprecation/<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal style='mso-layout-grid-align:none;text-autospace:none'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p> </div> </body> </html>
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