Attachment 574552 Details for Bug 809159 – proofreading and minor improvements to the KDE section

[patch] proofreading and minor improvements to the KDE section

0002-proofreading-and-minor-improvements-to-KDE-section.patch (text/plain), 3.86 KB, created by T.C. Hollingsworth on 2012-04-02 16:37:24 UTC

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>From c379ab9a185a19a4a23cf01bd4659d8df05f8593 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
>From: "T.C. Hollingsworth" <tchollingsworth@gmail.com>
>Date: Mon, 2 Apr 2012 09:15:46 -0700
>Subject: [PATCH 2/3] proofreading and minor improvements to KDE section mark
> up application names consistently
>
>---
> en-US/Desktop.xml |   35 ++++++++++++++++++-----------------
> 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
>
>diff --git a/en-US/Desktop.xml b/en-US/Desktop.xml
>index 80068bc..d5282b8 100644
>--- a/en-US/Desktop.xml
>+++ b/en-US/Desktop.xml
>@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@
>       </para>
>       <para>
> 	<package>KSecretService</package> is a new, secure
>-	password-storage system. <emphasis>KWallet</emphasis> manages
>+	password-storage system. <package>KWallet</package> manages
> 	passwords for KDE applications, and
>-	<emphasis>KSecretService</emphasis> makes those passwords
>+	<package>KSecretService</package> makes those passwords
> 	available to non-KDE applications.
>       </para>
>     </section>
>@@ -79,12 +79,12 @@
>       <para>
> 	The <package>Window Switcher</package> now has six possible
> 	layouts. You can choose between layouts in the
>-	<emphasis>System Settings</emphasis> application.
>+	<package>System Settings</package> application.
>       </para>
>-      <para>The <emphasis>KWin</emphasis> window manager is
>-      improved. <emphasis>Kwin</emphasis> offers significantly
>+      <para>The <package>KWin</package> window manager is
>+      improved. <package>KWin</package> offers significantly
>       improved performance.</para><para>The "Power Management" pane of
>-      <emphasis>System Settings</emphasis> is redesigned and
>+      <package>System Settings</package> is redesigned and
>       simplified. Power management settings now work on computers with
>       multiple display devices. You can also now modify power
>       management settings to change when you are in a certain
>@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
>       <para>
> 
> 	<package>Dolphin</package> is the file management
>-	application. <emphasis>Dolphin</emphasis> now displays files
>+	application. <package>Dolphin</package> now displays files
> 	more accurately, adapts to different computer hardware, and is
> 	more visually appealing.
>       </para>
>@@ -141,22 +141,23 @@
> 	are fixed, and multi-column text is selected properly.
>       </para>
>       <para>
>-      The <emphasis>Kate</emphasis> text editor features a new "Search
>+      The <package>Kate</package> text editor features a new "Search
>       and Replace" plugin, indicators of changed lines, and a new
>-      "modelines" editor that uses document variables. Fedora 17 has
>-      new documentation for <emphasis>Kate</emphasis>, accessible
>-      through the applications' "Help" menus.</para>
>+      "modelines" editor that allows you to set document variables like whether
>+      to use tabs or spaces more easily. Fedora 17 has
>+      new documentation for <package>Kate</package>, accessible
>+      through the application's "Help" menu.</para>
>       <para>
>-	<package>Cantor</package> is an aqpplication for mathematics
>-	packages. <emphasis>Cantor</emphasis> now supports Qalculate
>+	<package>Cantor</package> is an application for mathematics
>+	packages. <package>Cantor</package> now supports Qalculate
> 	and Scilab.
>       </para>
>       <para>
>-      The <emphasis>Marble</emphasis> virtual globe and atlas
>+      The <package>Marble</package> virtual globe and atlas
>       application is now integrated with
>-      <emphasis>KRunner</emphasis>. You can search GPS coordinates and
>-      <emphasis>Marble</emphasis> bookmarks through
>-      <emphasis>KRunner.</emphasis> You can also view route elevation
>+      <package>KRunner</package>. You can search GPS coordinates and
>+      <package>Marble</package> bookmarks through
>+      <package>KRunner</package>. You can also view route elevation
>       information, track earth satellites, and display OpenStreetMap
>       files in vector format.</para>
>     </section>
>-- 
>1.7.9.3
>

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