Attachment 574553 Details for Bug 809159 – Productivity section proofreading

[patch] Productivity section proofreading

0003-Productivity-section-proofreading.patch (text/plain), 6.60 KB, created by T.C. Hollingsworth on 2012-04-02 16:38:12 UTC

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>From a3e51616de5f6e14dbb92806d8aadd10f8945f06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
>From: "T.C. Hollingsworth" <tchollingsworth@gmail.com>
>Date: Mon, 2 Apr 2012 09:31:47 -0700
>Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Productivity section proofreading
>
>---
> en-US/Productivity.xml |   58 ++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
> 1 file changed, 29 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
>
>diff --git a/en-US/Productivity.xml b/en-US/Productivity.xml
>index 1d28d2d..66d1f85 100644
>--- a/en-US/Productivity.xml
>+++ b/en-US/Productivity.xml
>@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@
>     
>     <para>
> 
>-      <package>cherrytree</package> is new to Fedora. A hierarchical
>+      <package>cherrytree</package> is new to Fedora. It is a hierarchical
>       note taking application, featuring rich text and syntax
>-      highlighting, storing data in a single xml or sqlite file.
>+      highlighting, storing data in a single XML or SQLite file.
>     </para>
>   </section>
>   <section>
>@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
>       network.
>     </para>
>     <para>
>-    Lemon provides a modern themeable and easy to use Interface, a
>+    Lemon provides a modern themeable and easy to use interface, a
>     search panel, a price-checker tool, an administration tool for
>     managing your store, printed reports, and more... </para>
>   </section>
>@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
>       portable application for timetracking different projects. It
>       runs everywhere. It displays time data in diagram form, creates
>       customized reports and invoices or analyses measured data and
>-      suggests hints to improve user's time usage. The totally
>+      suggests hints to improve user's time usage. It is a totally
>       portable yet personal timetracker.
>     </para>
>   </section>
>@@ -202,11 +202,11 @@
> 	  
> 	  <para>
> 	    A new frame type called "Render Frame" allows for
>-	    rendering (and subsequently export) the output of every
>+	    rendering (and subsequently exporting) the output of every
> 	    program that can create PostScript, PDF or PNG files via
> 	    the command line (e.g. LaTeX, Lilypond, POV-Ray) inside
>-	    Scribus. The initial version of which was developed as a
>-	    project for Google Summer of Code and this project has
>+	    Scribus. The initial version was developed as a
>+	    project for Google Summer of Code, and this project has
> 	    developed to allow import of externally produced
> 	    documents, scientific publications and formulas. More
> 	    renderers can be added with a simple configuration file.
>@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@
> 	<listitem>
> 	  
> 	  <para>
>-	    Regarding bitmap images, the handling of Photoshop files
>+	    Regarding bitmap images: the handling of Photoshop files
> 	    has seen many major improvements, like support of multiple
> 	    clipping paths or PSD layers. The Image Manager has been
> 	    rewritten, and new non-destructive image effects have been
>@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
>     <para>
>       Also new to Fedora 17 is <package>timeline</package>, a
>       cross-platform application for displaying and navigating events
>-      on a timeline.
>+      on a timeline.  It can:
>       <itemizedlist>
> 	<listitem>
> 	  
>@@ -349,13 +349,13 @@
> 	<listitem>
> 	  
> 	  <para>
>-	    Different representation depending on zoom level 
>+	    Display a different representation depending on zoom level 
> 	  </para>
> 	</listitem>
> 	<listitem>
> 	  
> 	  <para>
>-	    Export to image 
>+	    Export to an image 
> 	  </para>
> 	</listitem>
>       </itemizedlist>
>@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      Targets can be defined by singlekeystroke 
>+		      Targets can be defined by a single keystroke 
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
>@@ -558,24 +558,24 @@
> 	    <listitem>
> 	      
> 	      <para>
>-		add/delete 
>+		Add/Delete
> 		<itemizedlist>
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      insert branch and make selection its child 
>+		      Insert a branch and select its children
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      removing childs of a branch 
>+		      Removing children of a branch
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      removing a branch and keeping its childs 
>+		      Removing a branch while keeping its children
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		</itemizedlist>
>@@ -590,20 +590,20 @@
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      can now be comfortably selected by clicking 
>+		      Can now be comfortably selected by clicking
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      very easy to follow a xlink by clicking into the
>+		      Very easy to follow a xlink by clicking into the
> 		      corner of the branch, where it begins
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      also "F" key can be used to follow 
>+		      Also, the "F" key can be used to follow
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		</itemizedlist>
>@@ -642,8 +642,8 @@
> 			<listitem>
> 			  
> 			  <para>
>-			    Quick checks of bugs status: All bugs in a
>-			    subtree can be updated by single keystroke
>+			    Quick checks of bugs' status: All bugs in a
>+			    subtree can be updated with a single keystroke
> 			  </para>
> 			</listitem>
> 			<listitem>
>@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@
> 	    <listitem>
> 	      
> 	      <para>
>-		create new map with current selection as MapCenter 
>+		Create new map with current selection as MapCenter
> 	      </para>
> 	    </listitem>
> 	    <listitem>
>@@ -737,7 +737,7 @@
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      shows all hits clearly, both branches and notes 
>+		      Shows all hits clearly, both branches and notes
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
>@@ -753,13 +753,13 @@
> 	    <listitem>
> 	      
> 	      <para>
>-		More filedialogs now can remember to switch off warnings 
>+		More file dialogs now can remember to switch off warnings 
> 	      </para>
> 	    </listitem>
> 	    <listitem>
> 	      
> 	      <para>
>-		Progressbar shows filename of currently loading map 
>+		Progress bar shows filename of currently loading map 
> 	      </para>
> 	    </listitem>
> 	    <listitem>
>@@ -770,18 +770,18 @@
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      can be positioned freely 
>+		      Can be positioned freely
> 		      <itemizedlist>
> 			<listitem>
> 			  
> 			  <para>
>-			    Floating next to mainwindow 
>+			    Floating next to main window 
> 			  </para>
> 			</listitem>
> 			<listitem>
> 			  
> 			  <para>
>-			    Integrated (top/left/right/bottom) into mainwindow 
>+			    Integrated (top/left/right/bottom) into main window 
> 			  </para>
> 			</listitem>
> 		      </itemizedlist>
>@@ -899,7 +899,7 @@
> 		  <listitem>
> 		    
> 		    <para>
>-		      zoom factor is saved and restored on load 
>+		      Zoom factor is saved and restored on load
> 		    </para>
> 		  </listitem>
> 		  <listitem>
>-- 
>1.7.9.3
>

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