Attachment 649298 Details for Bug 872940 – Additional patch to fix the typos in new sections

[patch] Additional patch to fix the typos in new sections

0001-Fix-typos.patch (text/plain), 4.77 KB, created by Yuri Chornoivan on 2012-11-21 16:23:51 UTC

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Created: 2012-11-21 16:23:51 UTC

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>From 923fef3d226c8f624c3f9572613b1c81a028beec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
>From: Yuri Chornoivan <yurchor@ukr.net>
>Date: Wed, 21 Nov 2012 18:19:24 +0200
>Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos.
>
>---
> en-US/Boot.xml       |    8 ++++----
> en-US/Networking.xml |    2 +-
> 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
>
>diff --git a/en-US/Boot.xml b/en-US/Boot.xml
>index f5031e6..c735353 100644
>--- a/en-US/Boot.xml
>+++ b/en-US/Boot.xml
>@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@
>   </section>
>   
>   <section>
>-    <title>Some <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> files have been depricated</title>
>+    <title>Some <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> files have been deprecated</title>
>     
>     <para>
>-      A number of files in <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> have been depricated. These changes should be transparent to most applications.
>+      A number of files in <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> have been deprecated. These changes should be transparent to most applications.
>     </para>
>     <section>
>       <title><filename>/etc/sysconfig/clock</filename> replaced by <filename>/etc/localtime</filename></title>
>@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
>         <screen><command>timedatectl set-local-rtc 1</command></screen>
>       </para>
>       <para>
>-        For more informatino on how <application>systemd</application> deals with time, see <command>man timedatectl</command> and <command>man localtime</command>.
>+        For more information on how <application>systemd</application> deals with time, see <command>man timedatectl</command> and <command>man localtime</command>.
>       </para>
>     </section>
>     <section>
>@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
>    <section>
>      <title>Hostname configuration moved from <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> to <filename>/etc/hostname</filename></title>
>      <para>
>-       There are now three seperate classes of hostnames in use on a given system. The <emphasis>pretty</emphasis> hostname is the high level hostname often presented to users by their desktop environment or shell. The <emphasis>static</emphasis> hostname is used by the kernel at boot, and is usually the system's <literal>fully qualified domain name</literal>. A system may also have a <emphasis>transient</emphasis> hostname assigned by a dhcp server. <application>hostnamectl</application> is provided for administering these hostnames:
>+       There are now three separate classes of hostnames in use on a given system. The <emphasis>pretty</emphasis> hostname is the high level hostname often presented to users by their desktop environment or shell. The <emphasis>static</emphasis> hostname is used by the kernel at boot, and is usually the system's <literal>fully qualified domain name</literal>. A system may also have a <emphasis>transient</emphasis> hostname assigned by a dhcp server. <application>hostnamectl</application> is provided for administering these hostnames:
>      </para>
>      <segmentedlist>
>        <segtitle>Command</segtitle>
>diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
>index 7c9f334..aaeb907 100644
>--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
>+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
>@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
>           <title>Better network security with <application>firewalld</application></title>
>           <para>
>           The firewall daemon <package>firewalld</package> will be the default firewall solution for Fedora 18, replacing <package>iptables</package>. Using <application>firewalld</application> will allow for application of policy changes without reloading, allowing connection states to stay unbroken when rules are changed.</para>
>-          <para>A <function>D-BUS</function> interface allows approved applications to communicate thier status and present complex or temporary needs to the firewall without requiring hand configuration by an administrator. This improves support for dynamic environments such as <application>libvirtd</application>, which previously had to be restarted when <application>iptables</application> rules were changed.</para>
>+          <para>A <function>D-BUS</function> interface allows approved applications to communicate their status and present complex or temporary needs to the firewall without requiring hand configuration by an administrator. This improves support for dynamic environments such as <application>libvirtd</application>, which previously had to be restarted when <application>iptables</application> rules were changed.</para>
>           <para>Manual administration can be done with <command>firewall-cmd</command>. Documentation on firewalld can be found in the included manpages: <filename>firewall-cmd(1)</filename>, <filename>firewalld(1)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.conf(5)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.icmptype(5)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.service(5)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.zone(5)</filename>.</para>
>       </section>
>       <section>
>-- 
>1.7.10
>

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