Attachment 910633 Details for Bug 1110069 – Dahms review

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PackStack_QSG (text/plain), 4.36 KB, created by Summer Long on 2014-06-20 05:11:07 UTC

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>Product: 	Red Hat Enterprise Linux OpenStack Platform 5
>Guide:		Quick Deploy OpenStack using PackStack
>Link:		http://file.bne.redhat.com/~slong/docs/Red-Hat-Guides/QuickStart-Packstack/
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>Spelling:
>N/A
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>Links: 
>No issues with external links.
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>Comments:
>At the beginning of the document, would it be possible to include a short description of what PackStack is and approximately how long the procedures in the guide will take? Coming in as a person without much context, information such as this might prove a handy reference to have. What do you think? DONE
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>Line Edit:
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>##################################################
>1.1. Prerequisites
>##################################################
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>	Dumb question: What is an all-in-one deployment, and why are we doing this instead of a component-based approach? ADDED to intro
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>	s/See for details:Single-node Deployment Requirements/See for details: Single-Node Deployment Requirements/ DONE
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>##################################################
>1.2. Install OpenStack
>##################################################
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>Procedure 1. Enable OpenStack Repositories
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>Step 1.
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>	s/requires your subscription user and password):/requires your subscription user name and password):/
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>Step 4. DONE
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>	Are the utility packages a must-have for the trial? If not, would it be simpler to leave them out here? 
>        NEEDED (utils include yum-config-manager and believe plugin-priorities are for packstack)
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>Step 5.
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>	I ran into some trouble with this step, which would result in the following output when run as is:
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>	[root@localhost yum.repos.d]# yum-config-manager --enable --enable=rhel-7-server-openstack-rpms \
>	> --setopt="rhel-7-server-openstack-rpms.priority=1"
>	Loaded plugins: langpacks, priorities, product-id
>	Usage: "yum-config-manager [options] [section]
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>	Command line error: --enable option does not take a value
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>	Changing the syntax to the following completed without errors -
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>	s/# yum-config-manager --enable --enable=rhel-7-server-openstack-rpms \/# yum-config-manager --enable rhel-7-server-openstack-rpms \/
>DONE
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>Procedure 2. Adjust Network Manager and Firewall
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>Step 2.
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>	s/Open up ports for Dashboard access/Open up ports for Dashboard access:/
>DONE
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>Procedure 3. Install and Run PackStack
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>Step 2.
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>	Dumb question - What will running PackStack do and how long does it take?
>ADDED to title (time needed placed in Abstract section.
>	s/Install the Packstack package:/Install the PackStack package:/
>DONE
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>##################################################
>â 2. Start up
>##################################################
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>2.1 Launch an Instance
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>	Dumb question for 2.1 - What is an instance? ADDED to header
>	Dumb question for 2.1 - What user should I log in as? Admin? ADDED 'Demo' (good catch, managed to delete that somehow.)
>Step 1.
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>	s/In your browser, sign into/In your browser, sign in to/ DONE
>	s/Figure 1. Log In Screen/Figure 1. Login Screen/ DONE
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>Step 2.
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>	My dashboard opened to the Admin tab - I had to figure out that the Compute > Access & Security option was in the Projects tab. Would it be beneficial to add a step to click on the Projects tab first? NOT NEEDED if you sign in as 'Demo' (Projects tab is the then the default).
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>Step 3.
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>	Dumb question - what is a key pair, and do I need it for this evaluation?
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>	s/On the Keypairs tab, click the Create Keypair button. The Create Keypair dialog is displayed./On the Keypairs tab, click the Create Key Pair button. The Create Key Pair dialog is displayed./
>	s/Figure 2. Create Keypair/Figure 2. Create Key Pair/
>	s/Specify a name in the Keypair Name field, and click the Create Keypair button./Specify a name in the Keypair Name field, and click the Create Keypair button./
>	s/ssh/SSH/
>REMOVED
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>Step 4.
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>	s/Select the 'Boot from image option/Select the <guilabel>Boot from image</guilabel> option/ USED ' ' to delineate (not a label)
>	s/from the Instance Boot Source dropdown list/from the Instance Boot Source drop-down list/ DONE
>	s/Select the 'cirros (12.5 MB)' image from the dropdown list/Select the 'cirros (12.5 MB)' image from the drop-down list/ DONE
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>Step 5.
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>	s/Click the Manage Compute > Volumes menu/Click the Compute > Volumes menu/ DONE
>	"and select Edit Attachments. " â 'select' is also bold, and should be in standard type. DONE
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>2.2 Log into your New Instance
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>	s/Log into your/Log in to your/
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>Step 3.
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>	s/Log in using the CirrOS image's user and password,/Log in using the CirrOS image's user name and password,/
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