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>BZ 1121498 - Networking Article Notes
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>Would rename to (will be a series):
>Evaluating OpenStack: Simple Networking
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>OpenStack Networking (Neutron) -> OpenStack Networking (neutron)
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>The abstract needs to be more precise. The document provides the steps needed to set up simple external connectivity using OpenStack Networking. An overview of the initial networking environment deployed by PackStack is provided.
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>Should add a <note> that this article builds on/requires a PackStack installation, and refer to the 'Evaluating OpenStack: Single-Node Deployment' article. Move 'disable NetworkManager' up to this note, because it's dealt with  there.
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>1.Networking overview -> 1.Networking Overview
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>What's the pipe icon in the diagram; should that be labeled?
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>The first sentence of the Networking overview section should say what the overview is about. Is it the overview of the packstack networking deployment, or an overview of the resulting network after the article is finished? Probably need a before/after explanation.
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>Would move the Overview of configuration steps' into a 'Configure the Network' section, and have the three configuration sections as subsections.
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>"...allows Networking traffic..." -> either "OpenStack Networking" or "networking"
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>'Follow these steps' -> 'Use the following steps' (it's a translation thing)
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>'# source keystonerc_admin' will only work if you're in the /root directory?
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>Do the four steps in section two have to be in separate screen tags?
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>vi <path> -> # vi <path>
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>"..open the Network Topology in Dashboard.." -> "..open the network topology in the Dashboard.."
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>Again, not sure about the separate screens for each command.
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>Change all 'id' instances to 'ID'.
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