Bug 1017794

Summary: Small rewording suggested in the "Supported Authentication Schemes" chapter
Product: [JBoss] JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 6 Reporter: Ladislav Thon <lthon>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Dana Mison <dmison>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Ladislav Thon <lthon>
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Build Name: 14874, Administration and Configuration Guide-6.2-1 Build Date: 10-10-2013 14:56:59 Topic ID: 23150-541286 [Latest]
Last Closed: 2013-12-17 01:01:07 UTC Type: Bug
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Description Ladislav Thon 2013-10-10 14:12:08 UTC 
Title: Supported Authentication Schemes

Describe the issue:

I'd suggest a small rewording in these sentences:

1. "Using the properties file system or using LDAP"

- I don't understand the word "system" here.

2. "When enabled, this allows the management of role membership to be managed by the administration of user groups."

- Too many "managements" here.

Suggestions for improvement:

1. "Using the properties file or using LDAP"

2. "When enabled, this allows role membership to be managed by the administration of user groups."