Bug 1043292

Summary: simple typos
Product: [Fedora] Fedora Documentation Reporter: peartown <hrusjos>
Component: readme-burning-isosAssignee: Zach Oglesby <zach>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Fedora Docs QA <docs-qa>
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Version: develCC: me, stickster, tiansworld, zach
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Last Closed: 2014-06-27 22:20:28 UTC Type: Bug
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Description peartown 2013-12-15 19:07:37 UTC 
Description of problem:
Few typos found in some of the guide chapters/files:

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):
20

How reproducible:


Steps to Reproduce:
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Actual results:
1. File: Making_USB_Media
   Line 281 (last para): Use this method for the distribution image, the minimal boot media image, or on systems with a UNIX operating system (including Mac&nbsp;OX&nbsp;X).
   Incorrect name of the Apple operating system.
2. File: Making_Minimal_Boot_Media
   Line 27 (5th para, 3rd item/indent of the list Use minimal boot media): to use a kickstart file during installation (refer to <xref linkend="s2-kickstart2-boot-media"/>
   The ending round bracket/parenthesis is missing.
3. File: Procedure_dd_Image_to_USB
   Line 22 (3rd para, preceding the output of dmesg command): ...The output will identify the <systemitem>device node</systemitem> of the drive, in this case <literal>/dev/sdc</literal>:
   The actual output however contains sdd (inconsistency).
   


Expected results:
1. Should be Mac&nbsp;OS&nbsp;X
2. The ending round bracket/parenthesis should be added
3. The device name should be changed to /dev/sdd

Additional info:
Just noticed, while doing the translation.
Comment 1 TianShixiong 2013-12-16 10:25:55 UTC 
Created attachment 837194 [details]
Patch for 3rd issue
Comment 2 TianShixiong 2013-12-16 10:28:14 UTC 
Created attachment 837196 [details]
patch for 2nd issue
Comment 3 TianShixiong 2013-12-16 10:43:23 UTC 
Created attachment 837197 [details]
Patch for 1st issue
Comment 4 Pete Travis 2013-12-20 16:45:15 UTC 
Patches applied, thanks Tian! I also noticed that line 27 here has a bad link, from when the content was borrowed from the Installation Guide, so that's fixed too.

https://git.fedorahosted.org/cgit/docs/readme-burning-isos.git/commit/?id=c1092a5b306dc852f54164f740950f9699cf8abb
Comment 5 Pete Travis 2014-06-27 22:20:28 UTC 
These changes have been published, thanks again.