Bug 1090678

Summary: [Docs] [Change] [Install] The section on preparing hypervisor boot media must be updated
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager Reporter: Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Tahlia Richardson <trichard>
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Version: 3.4.0CC: acathrow, gklein, juwu, trichard, yeylon
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Description Andrew Dahms 2014-04-23 23:13:53 UTC 
The section on preparing boot media for installing the Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Hypervisor must be updated to improve clarity.
Comment 1 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-29 04:09:21 UTC 
Documentation Link
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http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.4/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#sect-Preparing_Installation_Media

What Changed
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The following topics were revised as outlined below.

Preparing a USB Storage Device [8656-633430]

Minor grammatical edits and overall revision to improve clarity.

Preparing USB Installation Media Using livecd-iso-to-disk [7527-633330]

Minor grammatical edits and overall revision of the summary and results sections to improve clarity.

Preparing USB Installation Media Using dd [7854-633332]

Added box brackets around replaceables and revised the overall topic to improve clarity.

Preparing USB Installation Media Using dd on Linux Systems [7528-633339]

Overall revision to improve clarity and change the word 'command' with 'utility' to match other, similar topics.

Preparing USB Installation Media Using dd on Windows Systems [7529-633348]

Overall revision to improve clarity. Updated the names of the links to click to download Cygwin to the current architecture-dependent links.

Updated revision history: [30102-633282]

NVR
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Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.4-en-US-3.4-16

Moving to ON_QA.
Comment 2 Tahlia Richardson 2014-08-05 06:37:24 UTC 
Peer reviewed.

(In reply to Andrew Dahms from comment #1)
> Documentation Link
> ------------------------------
> http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.4/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.
> html#sect-Preparing_Installation_Media
> 
> What Changed
> ------------------------------
> The following topics were revised as outlined below.
> 
> Preparing a USB Storage Device [8656-633430]
> 
> Minor grammatical edits and overall revision to improve clarity.
Done
> 
> Preparing USB Installation Media Using livecd-iso-to-disk [7527-633330]
> 
> Minor grammatical edits and overall revision of the summary and results
> sections to improve clarity.
Done
> 
> Preparing USB Installation Media Using dd [7854-633332]
> 
> Added box brackets around replaceables and revised the overall topic to
> improve clarity.
Done
> 
> Preparing USB Installation Media Using dd on Linux Systems [7528-633339]
> 
> Overall revision to improve clarity and change the word 'command' with
> 'utility' to match other, similar topics.
Done
> 
> Preparing USB Installation Media Using dd on Windows Systems [7529-633348]
> 
> Overall revision to improve clarity. Updated the names of the links to click
> to download Cygwin to the current architecture-dependent links.
Done
> 
> Updated revision history: [30102-633282]
> 
> NVR
> ------------------------------
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.4-en-US-3.4-16
> 
> Moving to ON_QA.

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