Bug 1140472
| Summary: | [Docs][Bugfix][Admin] Review the Administration Guide for typos | ||
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| Product: | Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager | Reporter: | Julie <juwu> |
| Component: | Documentation | Assignee: | rhev-docs <rhev-docs> |
| Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | Lucy Bopf <lbopf> |
| Severity: | unspecified | Docs Contact: | |
| Priority: | unspecified | ||
| Version: | 3.5.0 | CC: | adahms, ecohen, gklein, lbopf, lnovich, lsurette, rbalakri, trichard, yeylon |
| Target Milestone: | --- | ||
| Target Release: | --- | ||
| Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
| OS: | Unspecified | ||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
| Clone Of: | 1125070 | Environment: | |
| Last Closed: | 2015-02-15 23:47:59 UTC | Type: | Bug |
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
| Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
| Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
| Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
| Embargoed: | |||
| Bug Depends On: | 1125070, 1149983, 1150028 | ||
| Bug Blocks: | 1153985 | ||
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Description
Julie
2014-09-11 04:31:54 UTC
First pass of changes in the format of: [topic] s/was/is (context). [10329] - IBM Bladecentre / IBM Bladecenter (correct product name) [10329] - IBM Bladecenter Remote Supervisor Adaptor / IBM Bladecenter Remote Supervisor Adapter (correct product name, plus IBM never use "adaptor" per p301 IBM Style Guide) [10329] - WTI Network PowerSwitch / WTI Network Power Switch (unlike the ePowerSwitch this isn't concatenated) [22305, 8313, 8315, 8317] vms / VMs (short for the plural of virtual machine and updated to match the other instances in the guide) [7628] vlan / VLAN (proper formatting of an initialism) [30634, 11928] gluster / Gluster (proper nouns for products yo!) [11928] volfile / volume file (the community docs lack a consistent form of reference for the Gluster volume file and there's no associated short form command to justify the usual "command creates neologism" from developer shorthand. So for the sake of simplification, I suggest that we write this out in full). [various] VNIC / check BZ #1150028 Other edits: [8317] Removed stray indenting on example (line 222) that was resolving in book as whitespace. And the whitelist: HostAdmin MasterSwitch ePowerSwitch 8M BladeSystem RSB WTI TimeoutToResetVdsInSeconds DelayResetPerVmInSeconds DelayResetForSpmInSeconds searchable 3ad org xmit ethtool glusterd RRDNS Subvolume subvolumes VFS mountpoints wildcard rebalancing rebalance Reviewed for docs QE. I have made a quick pass through all the diffs on topics touched by David (in the Admin Guide), and am satisfied with the changes. VERIFIED. |