Bug 1258973

Summary: [Docs] [Director] Wrong sample output for "Creating the external network" in Director docs
Product: Red Hat OpenStack Reporter: JF Bibeau <jean-francois.bibeau>
Component: documentationAssignee: Dan Macpherson <dmacpher>
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Version: 7.0 (Kilo)CC: adahms, jean-francois.bibeau, yeylon
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Description JF Bibeau 2015-09-01 15:54:57 UTC 
Description of problem:
neutron net-list sample output in Section "7.1. CREATING THE OVERCLOUD EXTERNAL NETWORK" is wrong.

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Docs for RH OS 7


How reproducible:
URL for that section is: https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_OpenStack_Platform/7/html/Director_Installation_and_Usage/chap-Performing_Tasks_after_Overcloud_Creation.html#sect-Creating_the_Overcloud_External_Network


Actual results:
$ neutron net-list
+-----------------------+-------------+---------------------------------------------------+
| id                    | name        | subnets                                           |
+-----------------------+-------------+---------------------------------------------------+
| d474fe1f-222d-4e32... | ext-net     | 01c5f621-1e0f-4b9d-9c30-7dc59592a52f 192.0.2.0/24 |
| d4746a34-76a4-4b88... | default-net | 4c85b94d-f868-4300-bbbc-8c499cdbbe5e 10.0.0.0/24  |
+-----------------------+-------------+---------------------------------------------------+

Expected results:
Based on the command provided, the output should look more like this:

$ neutron net-list
+-----------------------+-------------+---------------------------------------------------+
| id                    | name        | subnets                                           |
+-----------------------+-------------+---------------------------------------------------+
| d4746a34-76a4-4b88... | nova | 4c85b94d-f868-4300-bbbc-8c499cdbbe5e 10.1.1.0/24  |
+-----------------------+-------------+---------------------------------------------------+
Comment 3 Andrew Dahms 2015-09-03 06:38:48 UTC 
Assigning to Dan for review.
Comment 4 Dan Macpherson 2015-09-25 03:14:18 UTC 
Hi JF,

I recently revised this content as per a related BZ: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1254733

Here's the new content for creating and External network:

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_OpenStack_Platform/7/html/Director_Installation_and_Usage/sect-Creating_the_Overcloud_External_Network.html

How does it look to you? Are there any further changes you think are required to this content?
Comment 5 JF Bibeau 2015-09-25 13:03:08 UTC 
That looks much better, thanks!