Bug 1262164

Summary:	Sentence needing to be rephrased
Product:	[JBoss] JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 6	Reporter:	Julie Carbone <jcarbone>
Component:	Documentation	Assignee:	Priyanka Nag <pnag>
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Version:	6.4.0	CC:	ahoffer, chuffman, dmichael, eap-docs, jcarbone, nchaudha, rlandman+disabled, sjay, xhuang
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Description Julie Carbone 2015-09-11 02:13:10 UTC

Document URL: 

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.4/html-single/Development_Guide/index.html

Section Number and Name: 

13.3. Interrogation - Note

Describe the issue: 

The following sentence may need rewritting:

"The following examples we will use the Hibernate APIs but the same example can be easily rewritten with the Java Persistence API by just adjusting the way the FullTextQuery is retrieved."

Comment 1 Priyanka Nag 2017-11-15 09:13:08 UTC

Have rephrased the note. The changes can be viewed at - http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/23088/#sect-Querying

Comment 2 Nidhi 2017-11-15 09:41:51 UTC

The first sentence needs to be rephrased to correct the subject-verb agreement. So, we may either say "In these examples, the Hibernate APIs have been used." or "In these examples, the Hibernate API has been used."

Comment 3 Priyanka Nag 2017-11-15 12:14:31 UTC

Have updated the content now - http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/23088/#sect-Querying

Comment 5 Christian Huffman 2017-12-04 21:47:14 UTC

This sentence has been rephrased, and is available on the Customer Portal at the following link:

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_jboss_enterprise_application_platform/6.4/html-single/development_guide/#sect-Querying