Bug 1286499
Summary: | [Docs] [Networking] Provide an outline of network QoS and the configuration thereof | ||
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Product: | Red Hat OpenStack | Reporter: | Andrew Dahms <adahms> |
Component: | documentation | Assignee: | Martin Lopes <mlopes> |
Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | Radek Bíba <rbiba> |
Severity: | medium | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | high | ||
Version: | 8.0 (Liberty) | CC: | mlopes, rbiba, yeylon |
Target Milestone: | ga | Keywords: | Documentation |
Target Release: | 8.0 (Liberty) | ||
Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
OS: | Unspecified | ||
URL: | http://docs.openstack.org/developer/neutron/devref/quality_of_service.html | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
Clone Of: | Environment: | ||
Last Closed: | 2016-04-13 04:41:37 UTC | Type: | Bug |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
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Bug Depends On: | 1194126 | ||
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Description
Andrew Dahms
2015-11-30 03:50:55 UTC
Assigning to Martin for review. Assigning Radek as the QA contact. Radek - could you take a look at the changes for this bug? The content looks good to me. There are two minor formatting suggestions that I have, and I see a kind of dash that probably won't work if copied and pasted to a reader's terminal: 1 - In: RHEL OpenStack Platform 8 introduces support for network quality-of-service (QoS) policies. + These policies... Why the forced break ("+" at the end of the line)? I'd say the second sentence could be on the same line. 2 - In: +---- +# neutron port-update <port id> –qos-policy bw-limiter +---- You can make asciidoc render a nice replaceable parameter (in italics) this way: [subs="verbatim,quotes"] +---- +# neutron port-update _port id_ –qos-policy bw-limiter +---- About the dash: notice the difference between – and -. The former is a Unicode dash (en dash, probably) and I'm pretty sure that neutron won't take –qos-policy, –max_kbps, and –max_burst_kbps as options; instead, it will think they are parameters. (I don't have an OSP 8 system at hand, but try e.g. "ls –l" on any Linux system.) Can you replace these dashes with standard ASCII minus signs (hyphens) so folks can copy and paste the commands? Removed '+' character as requested. Replaced emdash characters. Tested replaceable parameter formatting, but from the render testing I would suggest that the <port id> usage seems more easily distinguishable than italics? In addition, using the <port id> style would persist through a copy/paste operation, compared to italics formatting, which would be lost. Works for me. Marking as verified. This content is now live on the Customer Portal. Closing. |