Bug 1296855

Summary: Getting Started Guide 6.6 doc review
Product: [JBoss] JBoss Data Grid 6 Reporter: Roman Macor <rmacor>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Christian Huffman <chuffman>
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Version: 6.6.0CC: chuffman, jdg-bugs
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Description Roman Macor 2016-01-08 09:29:35 UTC
Only small issues with versions, typos and suggestions for rephrasing.

Document URL: http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/23154/

Section Number and Name: 
Throughout the document

Describe the issue: 
JDG version is often 6.5

Suggestions for improvement: 
change version to 6.6


Section Number and Name:
1.3.2. Library Mode

Describe the issue: 
A number of features in JBoss Data Grid can be used in Library mode, but not Remote Client-Server mode. 

Suggestions for improvement: 
A number of features in JBoss Data Grid can be used in Library mode, but not in Remote Client-Server mode.


Section Number and Name: 
1.4. Red Hat JBoss Data Grid Benefits

Describe the issue: 
Add a node to JBoss Data Grid to increase throughput and capacity for the entire grid.

Suggestions for improvement: 
Adding a node to JBoss Data Grid increases throughput and capacity for the entire grid.


Section Number and Name: 
2.4.1. Download Red Hat JBoss Data Grid

Describe the issue: 
Download the appropriate files from the list that displays. 

Suggestions for improvement: 
Download the appropriate files from the list that is displayed. 

Section Number and Name: 
5.5. Custom Listeners for Remote Cache

Describe the issue: 
Extra indentation (twice) in code sample: 

	public boolean accept(Integer key, String previousValue, Metadata previousMetadata, String value,
                          
Metadata metadata, EventType eventType) 

Suggestions for improvement: 
Remove the extra indentation.


Section Number and Name: 
5.6.1. Installing camel-jbossdatagrid for Red Hat JBoss Fuse
5.7.1. Installing camel-jbossdatagrid for Red Hat JBoss Enterprise Application Platform

Describe the issue: 
... is installed by unpacking an archive system on a system ...

Suggestions for improvement: 
... is installed by unpacking an archive on a system ...
Or perhaps:
... is installed by unpacking an archive ...

Describe the issue:
For more information on installation options refer to theRed Hat JBoss EAP Installation Guide.

Suggestions for improvement: 
For more information on installation options refer to the Red Hat JBoss EAP Installation Guide.


Section Number and Name: 
5.7.2.2. Optionally: Add runtime dependencies as a JBoss EAP Module

Describe the issue: 
Download jboss-datagrid-${jdg.version}-camel-library.zip from Red Hat JBoss Data Grid 6.5.1 Camel Component for JBoss Fuse.

Suggestions for improvement: 
Download jboss-datagrid-${jdg.version}-camel-library.zip from the customer portal.

Comment 4 Christian Huffman 2016-02-17 16:33:11 UTC
This document has been updated, and a link to the full document on the customer portal is below:

  https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_JBoss_Data_Grid/6.6/html-single/Getting_Started_Guide/index.html