Bug 1311176
| Summary: | Address feedback on Chapter 5 | ||
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| Product: | Red Hat Satellite | Reporter: | Allison Heslin <aheslin> |
| Component: | Docs Install Guide | Assignee: | Allison Heslin <aheslin> |
| Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | Brandi Munilla <bmcelvee> |
| Severity: | medium | Docs Contact: | |
| Priority: | medium | ||
| Version: | Unspecified | CC: | adahms |
| Target Milestone: | Unspecified | ||
| Target Release: | Unused | ||
| Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
| OS: | Unspecified | ||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
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| Last Closed: | 2016-04-27 23:58:56 UTC | Type: | Bug |
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
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| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
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Description
Allison Heslin
2016-02-23 14:46:52 UTC
Moved the following to the right BZ: * Section 6.1.2 - Talk to cfouant about adding more detail about how to take a backup. * Section 6.1.3 - This seems like we have crossed from installation into configuration * 5.1. Configuring Satellite with External DNS “If you want to use an external server to provide DNS, you can configure Satellite to use an External DNS service.” This seems a statement of the obvious. If the introduction to chapter 5 was expanded to include answers to “Why?”, I think the above text could be removed. [Ali] DONE Shortened the sentence. “Deploy a Red Hat Enterprise Linux Server and install the ISC DNS Service. # yum install bind bind-utils Packages bind and bind-utils are required.” Why does it need to be stated that “Packages bind and bind-utils are required.” when you just gave the ‘yum’ command? [Ali] DONE Removed it since it's redundant. * 5. Configuring External Services Why would a customer make use of external DNS, DHCP etc services? [Ali] DONE “4. For testing or proof-of-concept deployments, run an insecure non-blocking device command.” I don’t think we should prompt customers to create insecure configurations. Aside from this, is this step to be completed in addition to step 3, or instead of step 3? [Ali] DONE Removed per Mike McCune. * 5.2. Verifying and Starting the DNS Service Is the IP address used in this section an example, or to be taken literally? [Ali] DONE - I added a line explaining that it was an example. * 5.6: CONFIGURING SATELLITE SERVER WITH EXTERNAL TFTP This is weird. Is this needed? Do users actually configure Satellite Server with external TFTP? Per Ohad we should leave it as is. Moving to ON_QA: No additional changes. All changes have been pushed already. This content is now live on the Customer Portal. Closing. |