Bug 1311367

Summary: [Docs] [Ironic] Address feedback on Chapter 2
Product: Red Hat OpenStack Reporter: Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Component: documentationAssignee: Martin Lopes <mlopes>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Radek Bíba <rbiba>
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Version: 8.0 (Liberty)CC: lbopf, mlopes, rbiba, yeylon
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Description Andrew Dahms 2016-02-24 05:05:57 UTC 
The following items must be addressed in Chapter 2. of the Bare Metal Provisioning Guide:

* In Step 8. of Section 2.5., change 'ironic-discovered' to 'ironic-discoverd'

* In the sub-sections of Section 2.6, '\' is missing from several multi-line
  commands in 'screen' sections.
Comment 1 Martin Lopes 2016-03-07 02:12:58 UTC 
Added changes to draft staging docs:

* In Step 8. of Section 2.5., changed 'ironic-discovered' to 'ironic-discoverd'. Checked rest of guide for any other occurrences.

* In the sub-sections of Section 2.6, added missing '\' character to multi-line commands. Checked rest of guide for any other occurrences, resolved.
Comment 5 Lucy Bopf 2016-03-14 06:21:18 UTC 
Assigning Radek as the QA contact.

Radek, would you be able to take a look at the changes for this bug?
Comment 6 Radek Bíba 2016-03-14 06:53:17 UTC 
The changes look good to me.
Comment 7 Andrew Dahms 2016-04-13 04:54:17 UTC 
This content is now live on the Customer Portal.

Closing.