Bug 1311367

Summary:	[Docs] [Ironic] Address feedback on Chapter 2
Product:	Red Hat OpenStack	Reporter:	Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Component:	documentation	Assignee:	Martin Lopes <mlopes>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	Radek Bíba <rbiba>
Severity:	medium	Docs Contact:
Priority:	medium
Version:	8.0 (Liberty)	CC:	lbopf, mlopes, rbiba, yeylon
Target Milestone:	ga	Keywords:	Documentation
Target Release:	8.0 (Liberty)
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Description Andrew Dahms 2016-02-24 05:05:57 UTC

The following items must be addressed in Chapter 2. of the Bare Metal Provisioning Guide:

* In Step 8. of Section 2.5., change 'ironic-discovered' to 'ironic-discoverd'

* In the sub-sections of Section 2.6, '\' is missing from several multi-line
  commands in 'screen' sections.

Comment 1 Martin Lopes 2016-03-07 02:12:58 UTC

Added changes to draft staging docs:

* In Step 8. of Section 2.5., changed 'ironic-discovered' to 'ironic-discoverd'. Checked rest of guide for any other occurrences.

* In the sub-sections of Section 2.6, added missing '\' character to multi-line commands. Checked rest of guide for any other occurrences, resolved.

Comment 5 Lucy Bopf 2016-03-14 06:21:18 UTC

Assigning Radek as the QA contact.

Radek, would you be able to take a look at the changes for this bug?

Comment 6 Radek Bíba 2016-03-14 06:53:17 UTC

The changes look good to me.

Comment 7 Andrew Dahms 2016-04-13 04:54:17 UTC

This content is now live on the Customer Portal.

Closing.