Bug 1338662

Summary:	[Infrastructure] Duplicate content in Instances chapter
Product:	Red Hat CloudForms Management Engine	Reporter:	Dayle Parker <dayleparker>
Component:	Documentation	Assignee:	Dayle Parker <dayleparker>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	Suyog Sainkar <ssainkar>
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Version:	5.6.0	CC:	adahms, jhardy, mfeifer, obarenbo, ssainkar
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Description Dayle Parker 2016-05-23 08:29:23 UTC

Document URL:  https://access.stage.redhat.com/documentation/en/red-hat-cloudforms/version-4.0/managing-infrastructure-and-inventory/#instances

Section Number and Name: Chapter 10. Instances, various subsections

Describe the issue: 

These sections appear to be duplicated within this chapter:
"10.6. Analyzing Instances and Images" is the same procedure (different name) as "10.15. Performing SmartState Analysis on an Instance or Image"

There may be others; might be worth a more thorough check.

Also, "10.14. Instance and Image Taskbars" is not really a section, and might be better if deleted or absorbed into the chapter introduction.

Comment 2 Andrew Dahms 2016-08-04 00:08:05 UTC

Assigning to Dayle for review.

Comment 3 Dayle Parker 2016-08-04 08:07:35 UTC

After going through the Instances chapter in detail, I've edited the following:

* deleted these sections (they were duplicated in another section):
- "Performing SmartState Analysis on an Instance or Image"
- "Viewing the Operating System Properties"
- "Changing the Summary View of an Instance or Image"

* also deleted "Instance and Image Taskbars" as the section was not providing any instructions or useful info, just describing the GUI.

* fixed typos, capitalization, grammar, punctuation throughout.

Comment 7 Dayle Parker 2016-08-19 03:56:17 UTC

These changes have been published in the docs on the Customer Portal:

In the CloudForms 4.1 docs:

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en/red-hat-cloudforms/4.1/single/managing-infrastructure-and-inventory#instances

In the CloudForms 4.0 docs:

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en/red-hat-cloudforms/4.0/single/managing-infrastructure-and-inventory#instances