Bug 1359864
Summary: | Openstack deployment fails with CREATE_FAIL (timeout) | ||
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Product: | Red Hat Quickstart Cloud Installer | Reporter: | Jason Montleon <jmontleo> |
Component: | doc-Release_Notes | Assignee: | Julie <juwu> |
Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | James Olin Oden <joden> |
Severity: | high | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | unspecified | ||
Version: | 1.0 | CC: | bthurber, dajohnso, dmacpher, jlabocki, jmatthew, jmontleo, joden, juwu, tcarlin |
Target Milestone: | ga | Keywords: | Triaged |
Target Release: | 1.0 | ||
Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
OS: | Unspecified | ||
Whiteboard: | |||
Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | If docs needed, set a value | |
Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
Clone Of: | 1298742 | Environment: | |
Last Closed: | 2016-09-14 10:25:27 UTC | Type: | Bug |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
Embargoed: | |||
Bug Depends On: | |||
Bug Blocks: | 1298742 |
Description
Jason Montleon
2016-07-25 14:53:45 UTC
The phrase "Ensure to" is awkward English. A better wording would be "Be sure to". Also, "...validate if the interface is available." should change to "...validate that the interface is available." Otherwise the sentence is ambiguous as one has to determine from context if "if" is being used as a conditional on QCI validating or that QCI does not validate for the existence of the interface (the latter being the correct interpretation in this case). Verified in version 1.0 of the document. |