Bug 1489775

Summary: Improve text in OSTree Sync section
Product: Red Hat Satellite Reporter: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley>
Component: Docs Content Management GuideAssignee: Michaela Slaninkova <mslanink>
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Description Stephen Wadeley 2017-09-08 11:10:42 UTC
Document URL: 

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_satellite/6.2/html/content_management_guide/managing_ostree_content#configuring_ostree_management_on_the_satellite_server

Section Number and Name: 

11.2. Selecting Red Hat OSTree Content to Synchronize

Describe the issue: 

In the intro, *second* paragraph, it says "Navigate to Content > Products and click on the Red Hat Enterprise Linux Atomic Host. The repository screen for this product appears."

but unless you enabled it before this point you will not see it appear under Products.

Suggestions for improvement: 

at the end of the *first* paragraph we should add the words. "Ensure you have a repository enabled."

Style issue: not supposed to say "appears". I think you could just delete that in this case.


Additional information: 

This bit is too vague:

and you want to propagate the <literal>yum</literal> content from those CVs downstream.


 I would rewrite that as "and you want to propagate the <literal>yum</literal> content from those CVs to a downstream Satellite.