Bug 1575950

Summary: Unclear sentence in Doc
Product: Red Hat Satellite Reporter: Matthias Pfuetzner <mpfuetzn>
Component: Docs Architecture GuideAssignee: Melanie Corr <mcorr>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley>
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Description Matthias Pfuetzner 2018-05-08 11:39:07 UTC
Document URL: 


https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_satellite/6.3/html/architecture_guide/chap-red_hat_satellite-architecture_guide-deployment_considerations


Section Number and Name:

7.1 5th paragraph reads:

" If you need to manage systems but do not have access to the subscriptions, then make use of the Smart Management subscriptions which entitles you to manage systems without have the entitlement to subscribe to software repositories. "

Describe the issue: 

This sentence is 1.) not correct english "without have the" (should be "without having the" and 2.) This sentence implies (or can be read), that there might be other ways to entitle the connection to a satellite server besides the Smart Management SKU.


Suggestions for improvement: 

As on our Shop Page: https://www.redhat.com/en/store/smart-management-add#?sku=RH00031

we write:

Red Hat® Enterprise Linux® Smart Management Add-On is required for each Red Hat Enterprise Linux system you want to manage with Red Hat Satellite. 

So, please also be clear and precise in the documentation.

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