Bug 361141

Summary: String quality improvement - en-EN
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5 Reporter: Francesco Valente <fvalen>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Paul Kennedy <pkennedy>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Content Services Development <ecs-dev-list>
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Version: 5.1CC: adstrong
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Fixed In Version: 5.1 Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Description Francesco Valente 2007-11-01 01:00:50 UTC
Description of problem:


Before choosing and configuring the hardware for the real server group, you 
most decide what which of the three types of LVS topologies to use.


#: Setting_Up_A_LVS_Cluster.xml:26

Comment 1 Don Domingo 2007-11-01 22:22:59 UTC
Hi Francesco, what book are you referring to? 

Comment 2 Francesco Valente 2007-11-01 22:35:08 UTC
Ops sorry

Talking about Virtual Server Administration

Francesco

Comment 3 Don Domingo 2007-11-01 23:24:26 UTC
reassigning to pkennedy, who we suspect is the writer for the Virtual Server
Administration book.

Comment 4 Paul Kennedy 2007-11-02 03:17:43 UTC
#: Setting_Up_A_LVS_Cluster.xml:26 

Changed to the following:
    Before choosing and configuring the hardware for the real server
    group, determine which of the three LVS topologies to use.

File checked in to HEAD and ported to all branches (RHEL510,RHEL500, RHEL460,
and RHEL450).


Comment 5 Paul Kennedy 2008-01-16 21:00:58 UTC
All releases fixed in repo. All pushed to docs page except for RHEL 5.1 version.
Requested push of RHEL 5.1 version to this page:
http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/csgfs/

Comment 6 Paul Kennedy 2008-01-23 15:39:13 UTC
Updated doc is here:
http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/csgfs/