Bug 469323

Summary: [Chapter 12.1] example missing parens
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5 Reporter: Kazuo Moriwaka <kmoriwak>
Component: doc-Virtualization_GuideAssignee: Christopher Curran <ccurran>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Don Domingo <ddomingo>
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Description Kazuo Moriwaka 2008-10-31 10:04:24 UTC 
Description of problem:

example lines don't have parens in real files.. just adding them will make it better to read.

The new line should read network-script network-xen-multi-bridge and 
remove the commenting on the line called network-script network-bridge. 

->

The new line should read "(network-script network-xen-multi-bridge)" and 
remove the commenting on the line called "(network-script network-bridge)". 


or.. 

The new lines will become as following:
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(network-script network-xen-multi-bridge) # script for multiple bridges 
# (network-script network-bridge) # comment out 
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Comment 1 Christopher Curran 2008-11-10 06:12:05 UTC 
Kazuo,

Does the new sections (updated for another bug fix this bug? See: http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html#sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Configuring_multiple_guest_network_bridges_to_use_multiple_ethernet_cards

Chris
Comment 2 Kazuo Moriwaka 2008-11-10 08:54:35 UTC 
This isn't fixed, yet.  I recommend replace a line 

The new line should read network-script network-xen-multi-bridge 
and remove the commenting on the line called network-script network-bridge. 

with

The new line should read (network-script network-xen-multi-bridge) 
and remove the commenting on the line called (network-script network-bridge). 


This parens will help reader's understanding.
Because, in xend-config.sxp, the line has parens.

thanks,
Comment 3 Christopher Curran 2009-07-31 05:19:23 UTC 
This should be fixed up with the new libvirt networking chapter. The paranthesis are also added.

Chris