Bug 473015

Summary:	Answer to question on Fedora media creation badly written
Product:	[Fedora] Fedora Documentation	Reporter:	Scott Radvan <sradvan>
Component:	install-guide	Assignee:	Paul W. Frields <stickster>
Status:	CLOSED NEXTRELEASE	QA Contact:	Paul W. Frields <stickster>
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Priority:	medium
Version:	devel	CC:	david, kwade, rlandman
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OS:	Linux
URL:	http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/f10/en_US/sn-making-media.html
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Description Scott Radvan 2008-11-26 03:55:03 UTC

User-Agent:       Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux i686; en-US; rv:1.9.0.4) Gecko/2008111217 Fedora/3.0.4-1.fc10 Firefox/3.0.4

At the given URL (as part of the Fedora 10 install-guide), we have:

===
3.4. How Do I Make Fedora Media?

A Fedora ISO file can be turned into either CD or DVD discs. Turn Fedora Live ISO files into bootable USB media, as well as a CD or DVD. 
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The second sentence of the response should probably have something like "You can" in front of it, such as:

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A Fedora ISO file can be turned into either CD or DVD discs. You can turn Fedora Live ISO files into bootable USB media, as well as a CD or DVD. 
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Reproducible: Always

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Comment 1 David Nalley 2009-03-27 13:43:57 UTC

Thanks for catching this! 

commit 5f7aa3269159a6c355e92f03e68bc68ecfcca6f5
Author: David Nalley <david>
Date:   Fri Mar 27 09:42:46 2009 -0400

    Fixing a sentence in the section on
    making fedora media to make it more readable. Fixing bug 473015