Bug 491028
Summary: | Minor wording errors in the Cluster LVM guide. | ||
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Product: | Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5 | Reporter: | Leam <leamhall> |
Component: | Documentation-cluster | Assignee: | Steven J. Levine <slevine> |
Status: | CLOSED NOTABUG | QA Contact: | Content Services Development <ecs-dev-list> |
Severity: | low | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | low | ||
Version: | 5.3 | CC: | cluster-maint, pkennedy |
Target Milestone: | --- | Keywords: | Documentation |
Target Release: | --- | ||
Hardware: | All | ||
OS: | Linux | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
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Last Closed: | 2009-09-03 16:33:03 UTC | Type: | --- |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
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Description
Leam
2009-03-19 00:00:51 UTC
Thanks for the thorough review. I have been updating the LVM manual for the RHEL 5.4 release and I have modified the book in accordance with all of these suggestions. For the comment on page 21: Yes, the point of the second example is to show that you can run pvcreate on a partition. I wasn't sure how to make this clearer. I made a very slight change to this sentence: The following example initializes /dev/hdb1 as an LVM physical volume for later use as part of an LVM logical volume. It now reads: The following example initializes the partition /dev/hdb1 as an LVM physical volume for later use as part of an LVM logical volume. So all I did was call out that this is a partition that is being used. I have reformatted the tables so the text does not overlap. As for the issue of filenames and commands being split across lines where they should not be: This is a bug in the production of our PDF documents. We are working on fixing this. If this isn't fixed in time for the RHEL 5.4 release I will try to go through the document and reword a few sentences to avoid the bad breaks. With the release of RHEL 5.4 I am closing this bug. |