Bug 611428

Summary:	typo in "Power Management Guide"
Product:	Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6	Reporter:	Zhang Kexin <kzhang>
Component:	doc-Power_Management_Guide	Assignee:	Ruediger Landmann <rlandman>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	ecs-bugs
Severity:	medium	Docs Contact:
Priority:	low
Version:	6.0	CC:	jskeoch, syeghiay
Target Milestone:	rc	Keywords:	Documentation
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Description Zhang Kexin 2010-07-05 08:39:17 UTC

Description of problem:
original sentence is "will impact the performance of your system notacibly"
I think it should be "will impact the performance of your system noticeably"

another one  "Severeal of the techniques"
I think it should be "Several of the techniques"

"versus the gains achived" should be "versus the gains achieved"

"They were all seletively chosen" should be "They were all selectively chosen"

"You alsso might consolidate" should be "You also might consolidate"

"avoid any suprises" should be "avoid any surprises"

"a simlar solution" should be "a similar solution"

"your prefered text editor" should be "your preferred text editor"

"it can immedately start" should be "it can immediately start"

"it requies a constant
" should be "it requires a constant
"

"Document relatime
" should be "Document realtime
"

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Comment 2 Zhang Kexin 2010-07-05 09:14:31 UTC

"You alsso might consolidate" should be "You also might consolidate"

Comment 3 Ruediger Landmann 2010-07-09 03:09:56 UTC

Thanks Kexin -- these are fixed in build 0.2-17 (except for "relatime", which is indeed correct).

Comment 5 releng-rhel@redhat.com 2010-11-11 15:35:37 UTC

Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6.0 is now available and should resolve
the problem described in this bug report. This report is therefore being closed
with a resolution of CURRENTRELEASE. You may reopen this bug report if the
solution does not work for you.