Bug 614564
Summary: | RHEL 6 Migration Guide - Chapter 2 corrections | ||
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Product: | Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 | Reporter: | Stephen Beal <sbeal> |
Component: | doc-Migration_Guide | Assignee: | Laura Bailey <lbailey> |
Status: | CLOSED NEXTRELEASE | QA Contact: | ecs-bugs |
Severity: | medium | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | low | ||
Version: | 6.0 | Keywords: | Documentation |
Target Milestone: | rc | ||
Target Release: | --- | ||
Hardware: | All | ||
OS: | Linux | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
Clone Of: | Environment: | ||
Last Closed: | 2010-07-19 03:46:11 UTC | Type: | --- |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
Embargoed: |
all fixed, thank you - changes will appear on the next publish |
Chapter 2: > > "This section outlines changes relating to installation of Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 which are new or different from the installation of Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5." > > "...changes", and "...which are new or differnt" seems redundant. Perhaps something like: > > "This section outlines the differences between the Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 and Red Hat Enterprise LInux 5 installation procedures." > > > Section 2.2.1 > > "If you have difficulties with this installation..." > > Should that be "If you have difficulties with the installation..."? > > Section 2.3 > > "This sections describes the changes in behavior when using the text-based installer:" > > Should be: > "This section..." ("section" not plural) > > This doesn't sound right: > "More advanced options yet, such as..." The "yet" seems unnecessary.