Bug 657339

Summary: Missing "e"
Product: Red Hat Enterprise MRG Reporter: Jan Sarenik <jsarenik>
Component: Management_Console_Installation_GuideAssignee: Alison Young <alyoung>
Status: CLOSED ERRATA QA Contact: Jan Sarenik <jsarenik>
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Version: DevelopmentCC: lbrindle
Target Milestone: 1.3.0.1Keywords: Documentation
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Description Jan Sarenik 2010-11-25 14:12:08 UTC 
In section 1.2. Installing and Configuring the MRG Management Console
subsection title Setting the Broker Address and Authentication
is immediately followed by a sentence starting with
,,Th broker ...'' And that should be probably changed to "The broker ..."

Rev 4.2
Comment 1 Jan Sarenik 2010-11-25 14:12:55 UTC 
Oops, another thing is doubled word "setting setting" in the same
sentence. Please correct that as well.
Comment 2 Jan Sarenik 2010-11-25 14:17:03 UTC 
And another thing, few sentences later:
,,However, as long as the owner and permissions on the file are set described in
                                                    missing as? ^^^^^^^^
Ownership and Permissions of Configuration Files this information will be
secure, provided users do not have root access.''

Please, either add "as" ar rephare the hilighted part of sentence.
Comment 3 Lana Brindley 2010-11-30 00:33:17 UTC 
(In reply to comment #0)
> In section 1.2. Installing and Configuring the MRG Management Console
> subsection title Setting the Broker Address and Authentication
> is immediately followed by a sentence starting with
> ,,Th broker ...'' And that should be probably changed to "The broker ..."
> 
> Rev 4.2

(In reply to comment #1)
> Oops, another thing is doubled word "setting setting" in the same
> sentence. Please correct that as well.

<para>
	The broker address setting will connect the &CONSOLE; without authentication to a &RHM; broker running on the same machine. You will need to add user and password authentication information and optionally modify the broker host and port.
</para>


(In reply to comment #2)
> And another thing, few sentences later:
> ,,However, as long as the owner and permissions on the file are set described
> in
>                                                     missing as? ^^^^^^^^
> Ownership and Permissions of Configuration Files this information will be
> secure, provided users do not have root access.''
> 
> Please, either add "as" ar rephare the hilighted part of sentence.

<para>
	The authentication information will be stored in plain text in the <filename>/etc/cumin/cumin.conf</filename> file. However, as long as the owner and permissions on the file are set as described in <xref linkend="orde-Management_Console_Installation_Guide-Installing_and_Configuring_the_CONSOLE-Ownership_and_Permissions_of_Configuration_Files" /> this information will be secure, provided users do not have root access. It is important to make sure the owner and permissions are correctly set.
</para>

LKB
Comment 4 Lana Brindley 2010-11-30 00:34:51 UTC 
Rebuilt in Revision 4.3.

LKB