Bug 708411

Summary: Ch6 Comments
Product: Red Hat Enterprise MRG Reporter: Robert Rati <rrati>
Component: Grid_User_GuideAssignee: Alison Young <alyoung>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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Description Robert Rati 2011-05-27 15:11:50 UTC 
Description of problem:
Example 6.1 & 6.4 - Can we clean up the host names?  These have the domain of cs.wisc.edu.

Example 6.3 - Clean up the usernames to not be real usernames. :)

"A file called ad contains ClassAd information: " -> "Suppose a file named 'ad' contains the following ClassAd information:"

"The condor_advertise daemon is used to insert the generic ClassAd information into the file: " - Incorrect.  Should be something like "The condor_advertise command will send a classad to the Collector.  Advertise the classad in the file 'ad' to the collector as a Generic ad type:"

Example 6.6 - Another cs.wisc.edu reference....

"system call time" - Unbold "system call", leave time(2) in bold

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Comment 2 Robert Rati 2011-06-01 18:43:15 UTC 
Still missing changes from my comments:
Example 6.3 - Clean up the usernames to not be real usernames. :)  Change tannenba and wright to something else.

"The condor_advertise will send a ClassAd in the file ad to the collector as a Generic ad type." - This isn't really correct.  My original wording was clumsy, but my intent was to define that condor_advertise can send classads to the Collector.  Then denote that the example is sending the data in the file 'ad' to the collector as a Generic Ad type.  I don't know how to word it, but I feel we need to differentiate the two points as condor_advertise can send classad data to the collector as multiple ad types.
Comment 3 Alison Young 2011-06-01 22:53:21 UTC 
(In reply to comment #2)
> Still missing changes from my comments:
> Example 6.3 - Clean up the usernames to not be real usernames. :)  Change
> tannenba and wright to something else.
> 
> "The condor_advertise will send a ClassAd in the file ad to the collector as a
> Generic ad type." - This isn't really correct.  My original wording was clumsy,
> but my intent was to define that condor_advertise can send classads to the
> Collector.  Then denote that the example is sending the data in the file 'ad'
> to the collector as a Generic Ad type.  I don't know how to word it, but I feel
> we need to differentiate the two points as condor_advertise can send classad
> data to the collector as multiple ad types.

Apologies, I thought they were already changed... my bad.
Comment 5 Luigi Toscano 2011-06-09 16:00:46 UTC 
All the changes have been applied to documentation version 0.1-11.