Bug 708780

Summary:	Missing words in 3.2.2.1
Product:	[Fedora] Fedora Documentation	Reporter:	Pete Houston <rhbugz>
Component:	install-guide	Assignee:	Petr Bokoc <pbokoc>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	Ruediger Landmann <rlandman+disabled>
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Description Pete Houston 2011-05-29 14:17:05 UTC

Description of problem:

In section 3.2.2.1 of the current Installation Guide at http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/15/html/Installation_Guide/Making_USB_Media-UNIX_Linux.html the paragraph contains the sentence "The graphical tool and the works only with the Fedora live image." which seems to be missing words.

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How reproducible: Always


Steps to Reproduce:
1. Visit http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/15/html/Installation_Guide/Making_USB_Media-UNIX_Linux.html
2. Read section 3.2.2.1 1st para
3.
  
Actual results:
"The graphical tool and the works only with the Fedora live image."

Expected results:
"The graphical tool and the live-cdtools work only with the Fedora live image."

Additional info:

Comment 1 Jack Reed 2011-10-20 05:18:48 UTC

Hi Pete,

Thanks for pointing this out. I've corrected this in version 16 of the Fedora guide. The draft version can be found at http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora_Draft_Documentation/0.1/html/Installation_Guide/index.html

Cheers,

Jack

Comment 2 Karsten Wade 2011-12-14 03:48:47 UTC

Removing myself for these bug components as I'm either no longer involved in that aspect of the project, or no longer care to watch this particular bug. Sorry if you are caught in a maelstrom of bug changes as a result!