Bug 738785

Summary:	Missing preposition in introduction to chapter 5
Product:	Red Hat Enterprise MRG	Reporter:	Trevor McKay <tmckay>
Component:	Management_Console_Installation_Guide	Assignee:	Alison Young <alyoung>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	Leonid Zhaldybin <lzhaldyb>
Severity:	low	Docs Contact:
Priority:	unspecified
Version:	2.0	CC:	esammons, jneedle, lbrindle, lzhaldyb, matt
Target Milestone:	2.1
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Bug Depends On:	733205, 738875
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Description Trevor McKay 2011-09-15 19:06:05 UTC

Description of problem:

"Configuration considerations for deployments change scale increases."

Grammatically correct, and possibly even true, but not what we're shooting for :) Looks like there is an "as" missing between 'change' and 'scale'.

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):

Revision 1-3 on the stage

Comment 3 Leonid Zhaldybin 2011-11-14 16:06:46 UTC

This issue was fixed in the upcoming version 2.1

-> VERIFIED

Comment 4 Lana Brindley 2012-01-26 19:26:26 UTC

This book is now available on redhat.com/docs. Please raise a new bug if you spot any issues.

Thanks,
LKB