Bug 740598
Summary: | Grammar/sentence structure unwieldy and difficult to follow | ||
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Product: | Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 | Reporter: | Kwan Lowe <kwan> |
Component: | doc-Resource_Management_Guide | Assignee: | Martin Prpič <mprpic> |
Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | ecs-bugs |
Severity: | unspecified | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | unspecified | ||
Version: | 6.2 | CC: | jskeoch |
Target Milestone: | rc | Keywords: | Documentation |
Target Release: | --- | ||
Hardware: | All | ||
OS: | Linux | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
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Last Closed: | 2011-12-07 12:43:42 UTC | Type: | --- |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
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oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
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Description
Kwan Lowe
2011-09-22 15:35:50 UTC
(In reply to comment #0) Hi Kwan, I've added some fancy graphics that (hopefully) make the Rules 1-4 in the introductory chapter a bit more clear. I've fixed some grammar mistakes as well. However, I could argue some of your points, such as sentences ending with dangling prepositions. I don't think that's a grammar mistake. Also, you did not provide any specific examples, and quickly going through the whole guide, I don't see anything majorly wrong grammar or composition. Please do let me know specific points in which the guide lacks quality. Also, if you are interested, you could join the Fedora docs team and help improve the guide yourself :) Find more info here: https://fedorahosted.org/resource-management-guide/ Nevertheless, thank you for your feedback. Please do share more of your thoughts on this guide if you get the time. It is greatly appreciated. The changes will be reflected in the 6.2 version of the Resource Management Guide. I am moving this bug to ON_QA for now, but feel free to re-open it after the 6.2 release. Cheers, Martin 6.2 version of the RMG available at: https://docs.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Resource_Management_Guide/index.html Closing for now. Cheers, Martin |