Bug 746862

Summary: Cleaning up the grammar in Introduction
Product: [Fedora] Fedora Documentation Reporter: James Weirick <jmweirick>
Component: amateur-radio-guideAssignee: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc>
Status: CLOSED EOL QA Contact: Fedora Docs QA <docs-qa>
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Version: develCC: eric, me, zach
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Fixed Grammer navneetsingh0693: review+

Description James Weirick 2011-10-18 02:25:14 UTC 
Description of problem:
The introduction has several grammatical problems which might cause confusion to readers.

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How reproducible:
Always

Steps to Reproduce:
1. Read section "1. Introduction"
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Actual results:
Amateur radio and Linux go hand-in-hand. Both allow users to experiment to the extent of their knowledge and to learn more along the way. With new digital technologies being used everyday open source software is the best way to stay cutting e dge in this ever-changing hobby.

Fedora has packaged dozens of software to make it easy for Fedora users to obtain and setup. Within seconds any user w ill be able to have the tools they to enhance their amateur radio experience. 

Expected results:
Amateur radio and Linux go hand-in-hand. Both allow users to experiment to the extent of their knowledge and to learn more along the way. With new digital technologies being used everyday, open source software is the best way to stay cutting edge in this ever-changing hobby.

Fedora has packaged dozens of programs to make it easy for Fedora users to obtain and setup. Within minutes, any user will be able to have the tools they need to enhance their amateur radio experience. 

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Comment 1 Karsten Wade 2011-12-14 03:45:36 UTC 
Removing myself for these bug components as I'm either no longer involved in that aspect of the project, or no longer care to watch this particular bug. Sorry if you are caught in a maelstrom of bug changes as a result!
Comment 2 Navneet Singh 2013-02-28 14:00:46 UTC 
Hi,

I have identfied the error in Amateur_Radio_Guide.xml and edited the file.

Thanks,
Navneet Singh
Comment 3 Navneet Singh 2013-02-28 14:01:48 UTC 
Created attachment 703902 [details]
Fixed Grammer
Comment 4 Petr Bokoc 2019-11-07 15:29:57 UTC 
I'm closing this bug as part of a Bugzilla cleanup effort. The most likely reason is that the bug has been opened either against a component we no longer publish, or against Release Notes for an EOL release.