Bug 772636

Summary: serial comma missing before the word "and"
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 Reporter: Laura Novich <lnovich>
Component: doc-Virtualization_Getting_Started_GuideAssignee: Laura Novich <lnovich>
Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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Version: 6.1CC: jhradile, jskeoch
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Description Laura Novich 2012-01-09 13:40:25 UTC 
Description of problem:
When items are written in a series, a comma needs to be added after the word "and".

on page 10....

• A common, generic,(add comma) and stable layer to securely manage virtualized guests on a host.
• A common interface for managing local systems, (add comma) and networked hosts.
• All of the APIs required to provision, create, modify, monitor, control, migrate, (add comma) and stop virtualized guests if the hypervisor supports these operations. Although multiple hosts may be accessed with
libvirt simultaneously, the APIs are limited to single node operations.
Comment 2 Laura Novich 2012-01-09 13:44:37 UTC 
Also on page 11 - same issue. 
Proposed fix -
 It can be used to perform virtualization administration, virtualized guest creation, migration, (add comma) and configuration tasks and allows
access to graphical guest consoles.
Comment 3 Laura Novich 2012-01-09 14:07:58 UTC 
page 19 - same issue or maybe not, depending on the context create, pause, and shut down domains should be the correction.
Comment 5 Laura Novich 2012-01-16 10:38:34 UTC 
• A common interface for managing local systems, (add comma) and networked
hosts.
On a second read this is not needed
Comment 6 Laura Novich 2012-02-02 08:38:13 UTC 
fixed as described