Bug 856266
Summary: | Multiple typos and other issues | ||
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Product: | Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 | Reporter: | Nikolai Kondrashov <nikolai.kondrashov> |
Component: | doc-Identity_Management_Guide | Assignee: | Deon Ballard <dlackey> |
Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | ecs-bugs |
Severity: | medium | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | unspecified | ||
Version: | 6.5 | CC: | jskeoch, nc, pspacek |
Target Milestone: | rc | Keywords: | Documentation |
Target Release: | --- | ||
Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
OS: | Unspecified | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
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Last Closed: | 2014-05-10 03:42:29 UTC | Type: | Bug |
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oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
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Description
Nikolai Kondrashov
2012-09-11 15:11:15 UTC
From : Configuring_Automount-Configuring_autofs_on_Linux ------------ This must be run from a machine with the ipa-admintools package installed so that the ipa command is available. On the IPA server, obtain a keytab for the NFS service principal. # ipa-getkeytab -s ipaserver.example.com -p nfs/ipaclient.example.com@EXAMPLE -k /tmp/krb5.keytab ------------ ipa-getkeytab is provided by ipa-clients package itself, we dont need to install ipa-admintools for that.. it'd be great if the example can be changed to run on the client side itself (rather than creating it on the server and copying to client(s)). (In reply to comment #0) > Here is the list. The hash character starts original text. > > # It is recommended that a separate DNS domain be allocated for the IPA > server. While not required (clients from other domains can still be enrolled > in the IPA domain), this is a convenience for overall DNS management. > Is it really "DNS domain ... for the IPA server"? Shouldn't it be "DNS > domain ... for the IPA *domain*" instead? I would recommend something like "It is recommended that a separate DNS domain be allocated for the IPA deployment." > # If the IPA server is configured to host its own DNS server, any previous > existing DNS ignored. > "existing DNS" what? # TIP: # If the IPA server is configured to host its own DNS server, any previous existing DNS ignored. A records and PTR records do not need to match for the IPA server machine, and the machine can have any configured IP address. I find whole "tip" confusing. I would say something like: If the IPA server is configured to host its own DNS server, all DNS queries from IPA server will be processed by its own DNS server. DNS records in IPA will take precedence before any DNS records configured in other DNS servers. All clients and replicas should be configured to use IPA-managed DNS server in that case. # 2.4.3.3. Using DNS # IPA can be configured to manage its own DNS, use an existing DNS, or not use DNS services at all (which is the default) *This statement is incorrect.* "use an existing DNS" is the default option. Please add following warning: Many services depend on correct DNS records. Please test your DNS environment thoroughly when not using IPA-managed DNS server. Mutual correspondence between A and PTR records is very important. > # To use DNS always requires the --setup-dns. > Maybe "To enable DNS always use the --setup-dns option." I would recommend "To install IPA-managed DNS always use the --setup-dns option." > # [root@ipaserver ~]# yum update * > The star should be quoted, like this: "yum update '*'", or: "yum update \*". > Otherwise the shell will expand it into current directory entries. Please use yum update without a star. It will update all packages and it is less confusing. Mass closure of bugs modified in 2013. All of these are in the currently-published docs. |