Bug 973563

Summary:	Questioning word, Asynchronous updates, and a typo
Product:	[JBoss] JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 6	Reporter:	Osamu Nagano <onagano>
Component:	Documentation - Translation	Assignee:	jito
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Version:	6.1.0	CC:	irooskov, sgilda, twells
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Description Osamu Nagano 2013-06-12 08:33:39 UTC

Title: 3.7.1 パッチングの仕組み

Describe the issue:
1. "Asynchronous updates (非同期更新)" sounds like a technical term of programming.
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非同期更新: 既存製品の通常のアップグレードサイクル以外にリリースされる 1 回限りのパッチです。
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2. A typo, dropping "S" for SELinux.
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欠陥の影響を低減する他の要素はあるか (ファイアウォール、ecurity-Enhanced Linux、コンパイラー指示文など)。
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Suggestions for improvement:
1. "Occasional updates (随時の更新)" or something like that.
2. "... Security-Enhanced Linux ..."

Additional information:

Comment 1 Osamu Nagano 2013-06-12 08:35:55 UTC

One more on the same line of 2.

3. "compiler directives (コンパイラー指示文)"
"コンパイラーディレクティブ" is more natural.

Comment 2 sgilda 2013-06-19 19:23:37 UTC

I checked the Installation Guide here and don't see a missing "S" in "Security-Enhanced Linux": https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.1/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html

Are you referring to the translated version?

Comment 3 Osamu Nagano 2013-06-20 00:29:02 UTC

Yes.
I've been asked to review the Japanese translation and it's here:

http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/ja/6895/#About_Patching_Mechanisms