Bug 974127
Summary: | [Doc Bug Fix] Documentation should contain example of creating managed domain with more than one host | ||
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Product: | [JBoss] JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 6 | Reporter: | Petr Kremensky <pkremens> |
Component: | Documentation | Assignee: | David Michael <dmichael> |
Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | Russell Dickenson <rdickens> |
Severity: | high | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | unspecified | ||
Version: | 6.1.0 | CC: | dmichael, myarboro, nsriniva, nziakova, smumford |
Target Milestone: | GA | Keywords: | Documentation, FutureFeature |
Target Release: | EAP 6.3.0 | ||
Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
OS: | Unspecified | ||
URL: | http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.1/html/Administration_and_Configuration_Guide/index.html | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Enhancement | |
Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
Clone Of: | Environment: | ||
Last Closed: | 2014-08-06 14:36:02 UTC | Type: | Bug |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
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Description
Petr Kremensky
2013-06-13 13:27:53 UTC
Topic created: Create Managed Domain on Two Machines Summary of changes/updates: - Created a new topic: Create Managed Domain on Two Machines - Included this topic within About Managed Domains Link to topic: http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/22508/#Create_Managed_Domain_on_Two_Machines Build ID: Awaiting build Hi David, I reviewed the topic you've created and I have few suggestions for improvement. 1) I'd suggest we either move the topic right after the section '2.1.3. Start JBoss EAP 6 as a Managed Domain' or update the 2.1.3 section with a new sub-section. Chapter 1. is just an introduction and it doesn't contain any step-by-step examples so far. 2) We should add some short introduction to the topic (single sentence might actually work), what will user achieve by following the example, meaning of host-[master|slave].xml config files, etc. 3) Create a new list item for 'Now we can manage domain:...<end>' part as it may seem like we can manage/access the server only from Machine 2 now. The rest of text is looking good, feel free to open a discussion on any of points I've made. Petr Topic name and number: 2.1.4. Create Managed Domain on Two Machines Changes done: Creation of a new topic Staging server link for verification: https://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.3/html/Administration_and_Configuration_Guide/chap-Application_Server_Management.html#Create_Managed_Domain_on_Two_Machines Build ID: JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform-Administration_and_Configuration_Guide-6.3-web-en-US-6.3.0-32.el6eng The latest build (Revision 6.3.0-31) still contains the typo ('domain on two machine(s), wherein one') Verified during post EAP 6.3.0.ER8 check. https://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.3/html-single/Administration_and_Configuration_Guide/index.html#Create_Managed_Domain_on_Two_Machines Revision 6.3.0-32 |