Bug 976234

Summary: [EAP610 admin & config guide translation to Japanese] 10.6.8. Configure Security Auditing
Product: [JBoss] JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 6 Reporter: Hisanobu Okuda <hokuda>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Takuro Nagamoto <tnagamot>
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Build: CSProcessor Builder Version 1.10 Build Name: 11865, Administration and Configuration Guide-6.1-3 Build Date: 20-06-2013 05:02:35 Topic ID: 31283-441578 [Specified]
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Description Hisanobu Okuda 2013-06-20 07:38:52 UTC 
Title: セキュリティー監査の設定

Describe the issue:
オプション: 追加、編集、または削除モジュールオプション。
(原文 Optional: Add, edit, or remove module options.)

Suggestions for improvement:
原文での "Optional" は module options の option とは全く関係なく、「必須の作業に加えて必要に応じて行う」という意味です。料理本等だと、「(お好みで)」と訳されるところですが、本書であれば、

モジュールオプションの追加、編集、または削除(任意)

でしょうか?

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Comment 2 Takuro Nagamoto 2013-07-30 06:09:04 UTC 
Corrections are made at https://translate.engineering.redhat.com/webtrans/Application.html?project=skynet-topics&iteration=1&doc=4724-435094&localeId=ja#view:doc;doc:4724-435094

Changed the suggested translation to "モジュールオプションを追加、編集、または削除します (任意)。" to be consistent with the style of other translations which describe procedures.
Comment 3 Takuro Nagamoto 2014-01-13 05:02:57 UTC 
A new document was published reflecting all the corrections.