Bug 995846

Summary:	[Install] "presently" used where "currently" intended
Product:	Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager	Reporter:	Zac Dover <zdover>
Component:	Documentation	Assignee:	Zac Dover <zdover>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	ecs-bugs
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Version:	3.2.0	CC:	acathrow, adahms, alyoung, gklein, yeylon
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Description Zac Dover 2013-08-11 14:01:12 UTC

Description of problem:
In Section 1.6. Supported Virtual Machine Operating Systems, this sentence appears:

  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization 
  of these guest operating systems: 

The word "presently" means "anon" or "in a little while". It doesn't mean "currently", which is what was intended here.

This is a tiny little bug, almost not worth raising, but I'll forget to make the change if I don't raise it.

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):
3.2


Actual results:
  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization 
  of these guest operating systems: 


Expected results:

  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization 
  of these guest operating systems: 


Additional info:
As I think about it more, I doubt that we need the adverb "currently". The currency of the document is established already by the version number on the title page.

As I said above, tiny little bug.

Comment 1 Zac Dover 2013-08-27 03:59:08 UTC

Documentation Link
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http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Supported_virtual_machines

NVR
---
Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-9


What Changed
------------
Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: 

Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems:



Updated Revision History [21134].

Moving to POST.

Comment 2 Zac Dover 2013-08-27 04:00:08 UTC

Documentation Link
------------------
http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Supported_virtual_machines

NVR
---
Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-9


What Changed
------------
I changed
  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization
  of these guest operating systems: 

To this
  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these 
  guest operating systems:



Updated Revision History [21134].

Moving to POST.

Comment 3 Andrew Dahms 2013-11-04 05:58:04 UTC

Documentation Link
------------------------------
http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Supported_virtual_machines

What Changed
------------------------------
Original sentence:
  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization
  of these guest operating systems: 

New sentence:
  Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these 
  guest operating systems:

[ 8301-502335 ]

NVR
------------------------------
Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-9

Updated Revision History [21134-502336].

Moving to ON_QA.