Bug 1060962
| Summary: | [Docs] [Admin] New Template Window GUI update | ||
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| Product: | Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager | Reporter: | Andrew Burden <aburden> |
| Component: | Documentation | Assignee: | Andrew Dahms <adahms> |
| Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | Tahlia Richardson <trichard> |
| Severity: | unspecified | Docs Contact: | |
| Priority: | unspecified | ||
| Version: | 3.3.0 | CC: | acathrow, gklein, juwu, trichard, yeylon |
| Target Milestone: | --- | ||
| Target Release: | --- | ||
| Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
| OS: | Unspecified | ||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
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Build Name: 13109, Administration Guide-3.3-1
Build Date: 03-02-2014 17:33:57
Topic ID: 7328-586597 [Latest]
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| Last Closed: | 2014-07-30 01:54:16 UTC | Type: | Bug |
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
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| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
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Description
Andrew Burden
2014-02-04 02:48:52 UTC
Fixed in 7559, 7328. Documentation Link ------------------------------ http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Administration_Guide/index.html#Creating_a_template_from_an_existing_virtual_machine What Changed ------------------------------ The following topics were revised as outlined below. Creating a Template from an Existing Virtual Machine [ 7559-587538 ] Added 'Description' and 'Comment' to Step 1. of the procedure, added the new 'Copy VM permissions' item as Step 8., formed the final paragraph into a 'formalpara' block with the title 'Resilt' and made minor grammatical edits to improve clarity. Explanation of Settings and Controls in the New Template Window [ 7328-587540 ] Added rows for 'Comment', 'Disks Allocation' and 'Copy VM permissions'. The previous topic on editing the properties of templates was removed and replaced with topic 28523. The options for editing templates are identical to those for virtual machines, and due to the substantial size of the topics related to these settings, the new topic simply points readers to the relevant section instead of copying the settings. Updated revision history: [ 21114-587541 ] NVR ------------------------------ Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Administration_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-47 Moving to ON_QA. Peer reviewed. (In reply to Andrew Dahms from comment #2) > Documentation Link > ------------------------------ > http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Administration_Guide/index. > html#Creating_a_template_from_an_existing_virtual_machine > > What Changed > ------------------------------ > The following topics were revised as outlined below. > > Creating a Template from an Existing Virtual Machine [ 7559-587538 ] > > Added 'Description' and 'Comment' to Step 1. of the procedure, If you mean Step 4 then this is done. > added the new > 'Copy VM permissions' item as Step 8., Done > formed the final paragraph into a > 'formalpara' block with the title 'Resilt' and made minor grammatical edits > to improve clarity. Final paragraph is indeed a formalpara with the title 'Result' (lucky I'm not QEing your BZ ;)), and clarity is fine. > > Explanation of Settings and Controls in the New Template Window [ > 7328-587540 ] > > Added rows for 'Comment', 'Disks Allocation' and 'Copy VM permissions'. Done > > The previous topic on editing the properties of templates was removed and > replaced with topic 28523. The options for editing templates are identical > to those for virtual machines, and due to the substantial size of the topics > related to these settings, the new topic simply points readers to the > relevant section instead of copying the settings. Should there be a link to the relevant section here? > > Updated revision history: [ 21114-587541 ] > > NVR > ------------------------------ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Administration_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-47 > > Moving to ON_QA. Failed QA, see comments above (if that section is as it should be and I'm just being a pedant, feel free to move the BZ back to ON_QA). Hi Tahlia, The direction with the Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization 3.3 and 3.4 documentation was to remove 'see also' and 'requirement' links, and to avoid using internal links where possible. This might be a good topic to raise for our current documentation cycle, but the above topic is in keeping with the direction for those cycles. Kind regards, Andrew Moving back to ON_QA. No worries, thanks Andrew. VERIFIED |