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Bug 1085159

Summary: Should say 'packets' instead of 'packages'
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager Reporter: Marina Kalinin <mkalinin>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Tahlia Richardson <trichard>
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Version: 3.3.0CC: acathrow, gklein, juwu, mkalinin, trichard, yeylon
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Build Name: 9026, Technical Reference Guide-3.3 Build Date: 07-01-2014 10:34:34 Topic ID: 8941-563612 [Latest]
Last Closed: 2014-07-18 06:18:19 UTC Type: Bug
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Description Marina Kalinin 2014-04-08 02:54:47 UTC
Title: Bond

Describe the issue:
Should say 'packets' instead of 'packages'.

Suggestions for improvement:
We transmit packets and install packages.
Packets is the correct term to use with regards to network.

Comment 1 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-08 11:50:12 UTC
Fixed in 8941.

Comment 2 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-08 23:39:16 UTC
Hi Marina,

Thank you for raising this bug.

I have updated the section on Bonds as follows to change references to 'packages' to 'packets' and clarify the overall topic: http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.4/html-single/Technical_Guide/index.html#Bond

Were there any sections that you were aware of that might also need to be checked?
I will take a look myself, but if there were any others that stood out to you then I would like to correct this issue as soon as possible.

Kind regards,

Andrew

Comment 3 Marina Kalinin 2014-04-13 19:19:20 UTC
Andrew, I searched the document for both words - package and packets and seems like they are used in the correct content. This is the most I can tell you.
Just keep in mind for the future:
- packets are going through the network
- packages contains software files, if I can say it this way :-) (packages can be transferred via the network, but network protocols would split them into packets).

Comment 4 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-14 02:43:28 UTC
Hi Marina,

Thank you for taking a look.
I will keep an eye out myself for any further references and get them fixed if any come up.

Thanks once again for raising this - it's definitely a glaring issue.

Andrew

Comment 5 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-14 02:45:34 UTC
Documentation Link
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http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.4/html-single/Technical_Guide/index.html#Bond

What Changed
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The following topic was revised to change references to 'packages' to 'packets' and revise the overall text for clarity.

Bonds [8941-628155]

Updated revision history: [30107-628156]

NVR
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Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Technical_Guide-3.4-en-US-3.4-5

Moving to ON_QA.

Comment 6 Tahlia Richardson 2014-07-18 06:18:19 UTC
Peer reviewed. 

No instances of 'packages' found; all successfully changed to 'packets'. 

VERIFIED.