Bug 1305528 - [Docs] [Backup] Poor punctuation in section titles
Summary: [Docs] [Backup] Poor punctuation in section titles
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat OpenStack
Classification: Red Hat
Component: documentation
Version: 8.0 (Liberty)
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
medium
medium
Target Milestone: ga
: 8.0 (Liberty)
Assignee: Martin Lopes
QA Contact: Radek Bíba
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2016-02-08 14:09 UTC by Deon Ballard
Modified: 2016-04-13 04:52 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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Last Closed: 2016-04-13 04:52:18 UTC
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Description Deon Ballard 2016-02-08 14:09:48 UTC
Description of problem:
https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en/red-hat-enterprise-linux-openstack-platform/version-7/back-up-and-restore-red-hat-enterprise-linux-openstack-platform/#validate_the_completed_restore


1. The 2.3.1 title is currently "2.3.1. Check Identity Service (keystone) operation:"
1a. Keystone and Operation should both be capitalized since it's a title. 
1b. There should not be a colon at the end.
2. The intro to 2.3 has a colon but no bullets or referents after it. This should be a full stop or the sentence should be removed.
3. There is no intro sentence to 2.3.1, just right into the command.
4. The 2.3.2 title is currently "2.3.2. Check the OpenStack services:"
4a. Services should be capitalized.
4b. There should not be a colon at the end.

Comment 2 Andrew Dahms 2016-02-11 01:32:40 UTC
Assigning to Martin for review.

Comment 3 Martin Lopes 2016-02-11 01:53:51 UTC
* Resolved issues in title:
"Check Identity Service (Keystone) Operation"

* Added introductory sentence:
"This step validates Identity Service operations by querying for a list of users."

* Resolved issues in title:
"Check the OpenStack Services"

Comment 6 Andrew Dahms 2016-04-13 04:52:18 UTC
This content is now live on the Customer Portal.

Closing.


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