Bug 473015 - Answer to question on Fedora media creation badly written
Summary: Answer to question on Fedora media creation badly written
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: install-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
medium
low
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Paul W. Frields
QA Contact: Paul W. Frields
URL: http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install...
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2008-11-26 03:55 UTC by Scott Radvan
Modified: 2015-04-07 03:19 UTC (History)
3 users (show)

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Last Closed: 2009-03-27 13:43:57 UTC
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Description Scott Radvan 2008-11-26 03:55:03 UTC 
User-Agent:       Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux i686; en-US; rv:1.9.0.4) Gecko/2008111217 Fedora/3.0.4-1.fc10 Firefox/3.0.4

At the given URL (as part of the Fedora 10 install-guide), we have:

===
3.4. How Do I Make Fedora Media?

A Fedora ISO file can be turned into either CD or DVD discs. Turn Fedora Live ISO files into bootable USB media, as well as a CD or DVD. 
===

The second sentence of the response should probably have something like "You can" in front of it, such as:

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A Fedora ISO file can be turned into either CD or DVD discs. You can turn Fedora Live ISO files into bootable USB media, as well as a CD or DVD. 
===

Reproducible: Always

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Comment 1 David Nalley 2009-03-27 13:43:57 UTC 
Thanks for catching this! 

commit 5f7aa3269159a6c355e92f03e68bc68ecfcca6f5
Author: David Nalley <david>
Date:   Fri Mar 27 09:42:46 2009 -0400

    Fixing a sentence in the section on
    making fedora media to make it more readable. Fixing bug 473015
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