Red Hat Bugzilla – Bug 592289
Trivial typo in Deployment Guide: Chapter 6. Network Configuration
Last modified: 2010-06-22 10:22:21 EDT
Description of problem:
There's a trivial typo in "Chapter 6: Network Configuration" in the online docs (April 2010). Might as well get it right before it gets to the final release. :)
Starts on the 2nd text line. "NetworkManager consists of a core daemon as well as to the GNOME Notification Area applet ..."
As a correction, the "to the" should be "a".
Though it would probably read a bit smoother if the "as well as to the" is instead replaced with "with a matching".
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Thanks for the bug Justin.
I've replaced that gaff with a nice Oxfordian comma-delimeted list of clauses:
"NetworkManager consists of a core daemon, a GNOME Notification Area applet that provides network status information, and graphical configuration tools that can create, edit and remove connections and interfaces."
[master 9ff7024] NetConfig: typo
Cool, that sounds much better. :)