Bug 614564 - RHEL 6 Migration Guide - Chapter 2 corrections
Summary: RHEL 6 Migration Guide - Chapter 2 corrections
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Migration_Guide
Version: 6.0
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
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Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Laura Bailey
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2010-07-14 18:55 UTC by Stephen Beal
Modified: 2013-02-05 23:56 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2010-07-19 03:46:11 UTC


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Description Stephen Beal 2010-07-14 18:55:13 UTC
Chapter 2:
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> "This section outlines changes relating to installation of Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 which are new or different from the installation of Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5."
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> "...changes", and "...which are new or differnt" seems redundant.  Perhaps something like:
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> "This section outlines the differences between the Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 and Red Hat Enterprise LInux 5 installation procedures."
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> 
> Section 2.2.1
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> "If you have difficulties with this installation..."
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> Should that be "If you have difficulties with the installation..."?
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> Section 2.3
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> "This sections describes the changes in behavior when using the text-based installer:"
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> Should be:
> "This section..."   ("section" not plural)
> 
> This doesn't sound right:
> "More advanced options yet, such as..."   The "yet" seems unnecessary.

Comment 1 Scott Radvan 2010-07-19 03:46:11 UTC
all fixed, thank you - changes will appear on the next publish


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