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Bug 643518 - feedback on Entitlement Alpha Overview
Summary: feedback on Entitlement Alpha Overview
Keywords:
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: Documentation
Version: 6.1
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
low
medium
Target Milestone: rc
: ---
Assignee: Deon Ballard
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
URL:
Whiteboard:
Depends On:
Blocks: 642718
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2010-10-15 20:25 UTC by John Sefler
Modified: 2011-02-11 00:44 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

Fixed In Version:
Doc Type: Bug Fix
Doc Text:
Clone Of:
Environment:
Last Closed: 2011-02-11 00:44:27 UTC
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Comment 4 Andrew Ross 2010-11-04 02:21:46 UTC 
Hi John,

Could you please check the updates from Deon in comment#2. If you are happy we can move the bug to VERIFIED. 

Thanks,

Andrew
Comment 5 John Sefler 2010-11-05 21:32:29 UTC 
Effective subscription management helps organizations achieve four primary goals: 
IN THIS SECTION, THE FOUR BULLETS DO NOT LINE UP CORRECTLY IN THE RENDERRED HTML




which helps administrators keep systems are compliant. 
                                        ^^^ DROP the word "are"



The act of subscribing to a subscription manes that a system 
                                         ^^^^^ TYPO should be "means"



There are three parties that are involved in subscriptions and content:
IN THIS SECTION, THE FOUR BULLETS DO NOT LINE UP CORRECTLY IN THE RENDERRED HTML
Comment 6 Deon Ballard 2010-11-05 23:50:04 UTC 
Fixed the typos and the list formatting. Good eye on the typos.
Comment 7 Andrew Ross 2010-11-07 22:08:16 UTC 
Thanks for the quick reply John :)

(In reply to comment #5)
> Effective subscription management helps organizations achieve four primary
> goals: 
> IN THIS SECTION, THE FOUR BULLETS DO NOT LINE UP CORRECTLY IN THE RENDERRED
> HTML
> 
> 

Fixed

> 
> 
> which helps administrators keep systems are compliant. 
>                                         ^^^ DROP the word "are"
> 

"which helps administrators keep systems compliant."

> 
> 
> The act of subscribing to a subscription manes that a system 
>                                          ^^^^^ TYPO should be "means"
> 

"The act of subscribing to a subscription means that"

> 
> 
> There are three parties that are involved in subscriptions and content:
> IN THIS SECTION, THE FOUR BULLETS DO NOT LINE UP CORRECTLY IN THE RENDERRED
> HTML

fixed.

All fixed, moving to verified.
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