Bug 689959 - Minor grammar/formatting errors in entitlements chapter
Summary: Minor grammar/formatting errors in entitlements chapter
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Status: CLOSED NOTABUG
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Installation_Guide
Version: 6.1
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Petr Bokoc
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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Reported: 2011-03-22 21:13 UTC by Deon Ballard
Modified: 2013-08-06 15:49 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2013-08-06 15:49:04 UTC
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Description Deon Ballard 2011-03-22 21:13:27 UTC 
1. Some (not all) of the titles have been reformatted from proper title case to sentence case. This is the wrong style and (even worse) inconsistent within the chapter and with other chapter in the guide. The titles should all be title case.

2. The formatting for the three options in the "choose server" section is wrong. This should be a bullet list; instead, there are no bullets and the "RHN Classic" option is oddly indented.

http://docs.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/96/html/Installation_Guide/sn-firstboot-server.html

3. The bullets in 34.2.4.1. Entitlement Platform Registration start off with lower case letters; they should start with capital letters
Comment 4 Petr Bokoc 2013-08-06 15:49:04 UTC 
This bug is really old and should have been closed a long time ago. None of the sections mentioned in the description are in the guide at this point.
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