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Description of problem: Example 6.1 & 6.4 - Can we clean up the host names? These have the domain of cs.wisc.edu. Example 6.3 - Clean up the usernames to not be real usernames. :) "A file called ad contains ClassAd information: " -> "Suppose a file named 'ad' contains the following ClassAd information:" "The condor_advertise daemon is used to insert the generic ClassAd information into the file: " - Incorrect. Should be something like "The condor_advertise command will send a classad to the Collector. Advertise the classad in the file 'ad' to the collector as a Generic ad type:" Example 6.6 - Another cs.wisc.edu reference.... "system call time" - Unbold "system call", leave time(2) in bold Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Additional info:
Still missing changes from my comments: Example 6.3 - Clean up the usernames to not be real usernames. :) Change tannenba and wright to something else. "The condor_advertise will send a ClassAd in the file ad to the collector as a Generic ad type." - This isn't really correct. My original wording was clumsy, but my intent was to define that condor_advertise can send classads to the Collector. Then denote that the example is sending the data in the file 'ad' to the collector as a Generic Ad type. I don't know how to word it, but I feel we need to differentiate the two points as condor_advertise can send classad data to the collector as multiple ad types.
(In reply to comment #2) > Still missing changes from my comments: > Example 6.3 - Clean up the usernames to not be real usernames. :) Change > tannenba and wright to something else. > > "The condor_advertise will send a ClassAd in the file ad to the collector as a > Generic ad type." - This isn't really correct. My original wording was clumsy, > but my intent was to define that condor_advertise can send classads to the > Collector. Then denote that the example is sending the data in the file 'ad' > to the collector as a Generic Ad type. I don't know how to word it, but I feel > we need to differentiate the two points as condor_advertise can send classad > data to the collector as multiple ad types. Apologies, I thought they were already changed... my bad.
All the changes have been applied to documentation version 0.1-11.