Bug 710336 - Section 13 Integration with Section 12
Summary: Section 13 Integration with Section 12
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: musicians-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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medium
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Christopher Antila
QA Contact: Nobody's working on this, feel free to take it
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2011-06-03 05:52 UTC by Christopher Antila
Modified: 2011-07-04 02:42 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2011-07-04 02:42:03 UTC


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Description Christopher Antila 2011-06-03 05:52:20 UTC
Section 13 reads like an advertisement for Frescobaldi, which is unprofessional. I adopted this tone so readers would be more inclined to use Frescobaldi, which I believe to be a more robust LilyPond front-end than other available solutions.

This would be more effective if Frescobaldi appeared as a "fully-integrated" part of the LilyPond-on-Fedora experience. Furthermore, it is consistent with the treatment of SCEd/GEdit and SuperCollider.

Comment 1 Christopher Antila 2011-07-04 02:42:03 UTC
Finished in revision 15.9.3, posted to the Docs website:

http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora_Draft_Documentation/0.1/html/Musicians_Guide/index.html

Will be included in Fedora 16.


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