Bug 714579 - Minor typos
Summary: Minor typos
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Logical_Volume_Manager
Version: 6.1
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Steven J. Levine
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2011-06-20 06:53 UTC by Yuko Katabami
Modified: 2014-01-10 05:42 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2011-11-14 21:07:44 UTC
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Description Yuko Katabami 2011-06-20 06:53:52 UTC
Description of problem:

Found a couple of minor typos:

Chapter: Troubleshooting
String: This section provides an example of recovering from a situation where one leg of an LVM mirrored volume fails because the underlying device for a 
physical volume goes down an the <literal>mirror_log_fault_policy</literal> 
parameter is set to <literal>remove</literal>, requiring that you manually 
rebuild the mirror. For information on setting the 
<literal>mirror_log_fault_policy</literal> parameter, refer to <xref linkend=
\"mirrorrecover\" />.   
Typo: "an" should be "and"

Chapter: Root_Swap_App
String: <emphasis> <application> Root on LVM requires an <literal>initrd</literal> image that activates the root logical volume. If a kernel is upgraded without building the ncessary <literal>initrd</literal> image, that kernel will be unbootable. Newer distributions support lvm in their <command>mkinitrd</command> scripts as well as their packaged <literal>initrd</literal> images, so this becomes less of an issue over time. </application> </emphasis> 
Typo: "ncessary" should be "necessary"

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):
Logical_Volume_Manager_Administration(EN)-6 (2011-05-19-15:20)
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Comment 2 Steven J. Levine 2011-06-20 15:36:08 UTC
I have fixed the typo in the troubleshooting section in my current working draft, and I will move this bug to ON_QA when I next build the document.

But I'm confused about the second typo -- there is no Root_Swap_App chapter in RHEL 6.1. This was a placeholder chapter in an early draft and was never part of the released document. The placeholder remains in the RHEL 5 repository (although it is not in the published book), but it is not in the RHEL 6 repository so I don't know where this came from.

Comment 3 Steven J. Levine 2011-08-15 16:52:22 UTC
Moving to MODIFIED since I have fixed the only typo that actually appears in the public document.

I have removed the Root_Swap_App chapter from the current svn repository for RHEL 5.

Comment 7 Steven J. Levine 2011-11-14 21:07:44 UTC
Latest build for RHEL 6.2 GA:
Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Logical_Volume_Manager_Administration-6-web-en-US-1-46_el6eng

Moving to CLOSED.


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